From owner-freebsd-current Sun Jun 28 11:37:03 1998 Return-Path: Received: (from majordom@localhost) by hub.freebsd.org (8.8.8/8.8.8) id LAA22983 for freebsd-current-outgoing; Sun, 28 Jun 1998 11:37:03 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from owner-freebsd-current@FreeBSD.ORG) Received: from ix.netcom.com (sil-wa5-20.ix.netcom.com [206.214.137.116]) by hub.freebsd.org (8.8.8/8.8.8) with ESMTP id LAA22978 for ; Sun, 28 Jun 1998 11:37:01 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from tomdean@ix.netcom.com) Received: (from tomdean@localhost) by ix.netcom.com (8.8.8/8.8.8) id LAA20728; Sun, 28 Jun 1998 11:36:19 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from tomdean) Date: Sun, 28 Jun 1998 11:36:19 -0700 (PDT) Message-Id: <199806281836.LAA20728@ix.netcom.com> From: Thomas Dean To: dfr@nlsystems.com CC: current@FreeBSD.ORG In-reply-to: (message from Doug Rabson on Sun, 28 Jun 1998 08:39:28 +0100 (BST)) Subject: Re: Draft manpages available for review Sender: owner-freebsd-current@FreeBSD.ORG Precedence: bulk X-Loop: FreeBSD.ORG Hi Doug, I looked at the changed man pages. All I noticed was some structure differences and maybe some grammar differences. There was one possible name conflict. Some man pages do not have 'Return Values' sections. BUS_PRINT_CHILD bus_generic_read_ivar devclass_add_driver devclass_get_maxunit devclass_get_name device_enable for device_is_enabled device_get_devclass device_get_driver device_get_ivars device_get_state device_get_unit device_set_desc for device_get_desc DEVICE_ATTACH - Description uses future tense, 'should'. Was this intended? DEVICE_PROBE - Description uses future tense, 'should'. Was this intended? devclass - /usr/include/sys/device.h contains enum devclass { ... } devclass_add_driver - ispell says 'initialisation' should be 'initialization' device_find_child - 'child of dev. with the' - period intended? Hope this helps, tomdean To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-current" in the body of the message