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Date:      Sat, 8 Dec 2001 10:23:14 +0000
From:      Nik Clayton <nik@freebsd.org>
To:        Michael Lucas <mwlucas@blackhelicopters.org>
Cc:        doc@freebsd.org
Subject:   Re: if you feel like reviewing...
Message-ID:  <20011208102314.G98994@clan.nothing-going-on.org>
In-Reply-To: <20011206140729.A5683@blackhelicopters.org>; from mwlucas@blackhelicopters.org on Thu, Dec 06, 2001 at 02:07:29PM -0500
References:  <20011206140729.A5683@blackhelicopters.org>

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On Thu, Dec 06, 2001 at 02:07:29PM -0500, Michael Lucas wrote:
> Well, since I got my commit bit shortly before both my esteemed mentor
> and I left town, Nik suggested that I have -doc review things.  I'm
> still not going to commit them until bmah approves of them, mind you,
> but I'm more comfortable if folks have every possible chance to shoot
> things down before I go near the repo.
>=20
> At www.blackhelicopters.org/~mwlucas/patches you'll see my uncommitted
> work (and a directory of old crap, please ignore).  Comments welcome.

authors.ent			Fine

contributors.patch		Fine

goals2				You've got a relative link to the
				copyright page.  That's not going to
				work when people are looking at the FAQ
				locally.  Best to make it a full link to
				the license at http://www.FreeBSD.org/

				Apart from that, fine.

mirror-web			Fine

release-made			Almost fine.  In "mirror-web" you
				removed the "Certainly!", in this one,
				you retained "latest goodies".  Perhaps
				"latest changes" or "latest
				technologies" would be better?

				Your call.

tracking-release		Fine.

N
--=20
FreeBSD: The Power to Serve             http://www.freebsd.org/
FreeBSD Documentation Project           http://www.freebsd.org/docproj/

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