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Date:      Sun, 12 May 2013 10:42:45 +0000 (UTC)
From:      Rene Ladan <rene@FreeBSD.org>
To:        doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org
Subject:   svn commit: r41606 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs
Message-ID:  <201305121042.r4CAgjdh056671@svn.freebsd.org>

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Author: rene
Date: Sun May 12 10:42:44 2013
New Revision: 41606
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/41606

Log:
  Clean this page up a bit.
  
  Approved by:	remko (mentor)

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/features.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/features.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/features.xml	Sun May 12 07:10:24 2013	(r41605)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/features.xml	Sun May 12 10:42:44 2013	(r41606)
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="iso-8859-1"?>
 <!DOCTYPE html PUBLIC "-//FreeBSD//DTD XHTML 1.0 Transitional-Based Extension//EN"
 "http://www.FreeBSD.org/XML/doc/share/xml/xhtml10-freebsd.dtd" [
-<!ENTITY title "About FreeBSD's Technological Advances">
+<!ENTITY title "About &os;'s Technological Advances">
 ]>
 
 <html xmlns="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml">;
@@ -63,8 +63,8 @@
 	  per-process, per-jail, and per-login class resource
 	  accounting information.  Note that this is neither built nor
 	  installed by default.  To build and install this, specify
-	  options RACCT in the kernel configuration file and rebuild
-	  the base system as described in the FreeBSD Handbook</li>
+	  the option RACCT in the kernel configuration file and rebuild
+	  the base system as described in the &os; Handbook.</li>
 
 	<li><b>Resource-limiting API:</b> has been implemented.
 	  It works in conjunction with the RACCT resource accounting
@@ -74,9 +74,9 @@
 	  rules in userland.  Note that this is neither  built nor
 	  installed by default.</li>
 
-	<li><b>Usb:</b> subsystem now supports USB packet filter.
+	<li><b>USB:</b> subsystem now supports USB packet filter.
 	  This allows capturing packets which go through each USB
-	  host rchitecture of the packet filter is similar to that of
+	  host architecture.  The packet filter is similar to that of
 	  bpf.  The userland program usbdump(8) has been
 	  added.</li>
 
@@ -102,9 +102,9 @@
 	  for background fsck(8) even on unclean shutdowns.</li>
       </ul>
 
-      <p><b>&os;&nbsp;8.x</b> brought many new
+      <p><b>&os;&nbsp;8.X</b> brought many new
 	features and performance enhancements.  With special focus on
-	a new USB stack, &os;-8.x also shipped with experimental support
+	a new USB stack, &os;&nbsp;8.X also shipped with experimental support
 	for NFSv4.  A new TTY layer was introduced, which improves
 	scalability and resources handling in SMP enabled systems.</p>
 
@@ -126,10 +126,10 @@
 
 	<li><b>Linux emulation:</b> layer has been updated to version
 	  2.6.16 and the default Linux infrastructure port is now
-	  emulators/linux_base-f10 (Fedora 10)</li>
+	  emulators/linux_base-f10 (Fedora 10).</li>
 
 	<li><b>Network Virtualization:</b> A container ("vimage") has
-	  been implemented, extending the FreeBSD kernel to maintain
+	  been implemented, extending the &os; kernel to maintain
 	  multiple independent instances of networking state.
 	  Vimage facilities can be used independently to create fully
 	  virtualized network topologies, and jail(8) can directly



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