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Subject: Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security
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On Sunday 12 November 2006 01:13 Giorgos Keramidas wrote:
> keramida    2006-11-12 00:13:05 UTC
>
>   FreeBSD doc repository
>
>   Modified files:
>     en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security chapter.sgml
>   Log:
>   Wording fixes and other minor nits to the 'Security' chapter.
>
>   Submitted by:   Niclas Zeising <lothrandil@n00b.apagnu.se>
>   PR:             docs/105256
>
>   Revision  Changes    Path
>   1.307     +26 -27  =20
> doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml

Hello,

just MFen'd this commit to the german handbook and now I have
one question.  In my opinion the word "Ssh" looks very strange
(even if it is the first word in the sentence) so I think it
would be better to change it into something like the version
in the following diff:

=2D-- chapter.sgml Sun Nov 12 01:13:04 2006
+++ chapter.sgml.new     Sun Nov 12 11:12:55 2006
@@ -935,7 +935,7 @@
         <option>-x</option> option.  <application>ssh</application>
         encrypts everything by default.</para>

=2D      <para>Ssh works quite well in every
+      <para><application>ssh</application> works quite well in every
         respect except that it forwards encryption keys by default. =20
What
         this means is that if you have a secure workstation holding=20
keys
         that give you access to the rest of the system, and you

Additionally we now have six different versions of "ssh" in this
document which I find a little bit confusing:

=2D Ssh
=2D ssh
=2D SSH
=2D <application>Ssh</application>
=2D <application>ssh</application>
=2D <application>SSH</application>

Maybe a little cleanup is needed here?  Any thoughts?



J. Kois

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