Date: Tue, 31 May 2011 05:00:22 GMT From: Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@MIT.EDU> To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: docs/157452: grammar and style nits in ipfw.8 Message-ID: <201105310500.p4V50Mfh036750@freefall.freebsd.org>
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The following reply was made to PR docs/157452; it has been noted by GNATS. From: Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@MIT.EDU> To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org Cc: Subject: Re: docs/157452: grammar and style nits in ipfw.8 Date: Tue, 31 May 2011 00:52:00 -0400 (EDT) This message is in MIME format. The first part should be readable text, while the remaining parts are likely unreadable without MIME-aware tools. ---559023410-520574824-1306817520=:6818 Content-Type: TEXT/PLAIN; charset=US-ASCII; format=flowed On Tue, 31 May 2011, FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org wrote: > > http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=157452 > >> Category: docs >> Responsible: freebsd-doc >> Synopsis: grammar and style nits in ipfw.8 And here's the second patch. I change the Xr from setfib(1) to setfib(2) since the latter mentions a "current system maximum" number of fibs; mention of the 16-fib limit to come in a separate PR. -Ben Kaduk ---559023410-520574824-1306817520=:6818 Content-Type: TEXT/PLAIN; charset=US-ASCII; name=ipfw.8.diff.txt Content-Transfer-Encoding: BASE64 Content-ID: <alpine.GSO.1.10.1105310052000.6818@multics.mit.edu> Content-Description: Content-Disposition: attachment; filename=ipfw.8.diff.txt LS0tIGlwZncuOC53aGl0ZXNwYWNlCTIwMTEtMDUtMzAgMjA6MDU6MzUuMDAw MDAwMDAwIC0wNDAwDQorKysgaXBmdy44CTIwMTEtMDUtMzEgMDA6NDA6Mzcu MDAwMDAwMDAwIC0wNDAwDQpAQCAtMSw3ICsxLDcgQEANCiAuXCINCiAuXCIg JEZyZWVCU0Q6IHNyYy9zYmluL2lwZncvaXBmdy44LHYgMS4yNDYgMjAxMS8w NS8zMCAwNTozNzoyNiBhZSBFeHAgJA0KIC5cIg0KLS5EZCBNYXkgMzAsIDIw MTENCisuRGQgTWF5IDMxLCAyMDExDQogLkR0IElQRlcgOA0KIC5Pcw0KIC5T aCBOQU1FDQpAQCAtODc3LDI1ICs4NzcsMjYgQEANCiBUaGUgcGFja2V0IGlz IHRhZ2dlZCBzbyBhcyB0byB1c2UgdGhlIEZJQiAocm91dGluZyB0YWJsZSkN CiAuQXIgZmlibnVtDQogaW4gYW55IHN1YnNlcXVlbnQgZm9yd2FyZGluZyBk ZWNpc2lvbnMuDQotSW5pdGlhbGx5IHRoaXMgaXMgbGltaXRlZCB0byB0aGUg dmFsdWVzIDAgdGhyb3VnaCAxNSwgc2VlDQotLlhyIHNldGZpYiAxIC4NCitJ biB0aGUgY3VycmVudCBpbXBsZW1lbnRhdGlvbiwgdGhpcyBpcyBsaW1pdGVk IHRvIHRoZSB2YWx1ZXMgMCB0aHJvdWdoIDE1LCBzZWUNCisuWHIgc2V0Zmli IDIgLg0KIFByb2Nlc3NpbmcgY29udGludWVzIGF0IHRoZSBuZXh0IHJ1bGUu DQogSXQgaXMgcG9zc2libGUgdG8gdXNlIHRoZSANCiAuQ20gdGFibGVhcmcN Ci1rZXl3b3JkIHdpdGggYSBzZXRmaWIuDQotSWYgdGFibGVhcmcgdmFsdWUg aXMgbm90IHdpdGhpbiBjb21waWxlZCBGSUIgcmFuZ2UgcGFja2V0IGZpYiBp cyBzZXQgdG8gMC4NCitrZXl3b3JkIHdpdGggc2V0ZmliLg0KK0lmIHRoZSB0 YWJsZWFyZyB2YWx1ZSBpcyBub3Qgd2l0aGluIHRoZSBjb21waWxlZCByYW5n ZSBvZiBGSUJzLA0KK3RoZSBwYWNrZXQncyBmaWIgaXMgc2V0IHRvIDAuDQog Lkl0IENtIHJlYXNzDQotUXVldWUgYW5kIHJlYXNzZW1ibGUgaXAgZnJhZ21l bnRzLg0KK1F1ZXVlIGFuZCByZWFzc2VtYmxlIElQIGZyYWdtZW50cy4NCiBJ ZiB0aGUgcGFja2V0IGlzIG5vdCBmcmFnbWVudGVkLCBjb3VudGVycyBhcmUN CiB1cGRhdGVkIGFuZCBwcm9jZXNzaW5nIGNvbnRpbnVlcyB3aXRoIHRoZSBu ZXh0IHJ1bGUuDQogSWYgdGhlIHBhY2tldCBpcyB0aGUgbGFzdCBsb2dpY2Fs IGZyYWdtZW50LCB0aGUgcGFja2V0IGlzIHJlYXNzZW1ibGVkIGFuZCwgaWYN CiAuVmEgbmV0LmluZXQuaXAuZncub25lX3Bhc3MNCi1pcyBzZXQgdG8gMCwg cHJvY2Vzc2luZyBjb250aW51ZXMgd2l0aCB0aGUgbmV4dCBydWxlLA0KLWVs c2UgcGFja2V0IGlzIGFsbG93ZWQgdG8gcGFzcyBhbmQgc2VhcmNoIHRlcm1p bmF0ZXMuDQotSWYgdGhlIHBhY2tldCBpcyBhIGZyYWdtZW50IGluIHRoZSBt aWRkbGUsIGl0IGlzDQoraXMgc2V0IHRvIDAsIHByb2Nlc3NpbmcgY29udGlu dWVzIHdpdGggdGhlIG5leHQgcnVsZS4NCitPdGhlcndpc2UsIHRoZSBwYWNr ZXQgaXMgYWxsb3dlZCB0byBwYXNzIGFuZCB0aGUgc2VhcmNoIHRlcm1pbmF0 ZXMuDQorSWYgdGhlIHBhY2tldCBpcyBhIGZyYWdtZW50IGluIHRoZSBtaWRk bGUgb2YgYSBsb2dpY2FsIGdyb3VwIG9mIGZyYWdtZW50cywgaXQgaXMNCiBj b25zdW1lZCBhbmQgcHJvY2Vzc2luZyBzdG9wcyBpbW1lZGlhdGVseS4NCiAu UHANCi1GcmFnbWVudHMgaGFuZGxpbmcgY2FuIGJlIHR1bmVkIHZpYQ0KK0Zy YWdtZW50IGhhbmRsaW5nIGNhbiBiZSB0dW5lZCB2aWENCiAuVmEgbmV0Lmlu ZXQuaXAubWF4ZnJhZ3BhY2tldHMNCiBhbmQNCiAuVmEgbmV0LmluZXQuaXAu bWF4ZnJhZ3NwZXJwYWNrZXQNCg== ---559023410-520574824-1306817520=:6818--
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