Date: Fri, 15 Mar 2013 17:49:26 +0000 (UTC) From: Eitan Adler <eadler@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r41234 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq Message-ID: <201303151749.r2FHnQrh006712@svn.freebsd.org>
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Author: eadler Date: Fri Mar 15 17:49:26 2013 New Revision: 41234 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/41234 Log: Remove duplicate text from the introduction and move it into the abstract. Simplify some of the text from both sections. Reviewed by: doc Approved by: jkois (mentor) Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml Fri Mar 15 16:49:52 2013 (r41233) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml Fri Mar 15 17:49:26 2013 (r41234) @@ -71,39 +71,26 @@ <releaseinfo>$FreeBSD$</releaseinfo> <abstract> - <para>This is the FAQ for &os; versions - &rel2.relx; and &rel.relx;. - If you are interested in helping with - this project, send email to the &a.doc;. The latest version of + <para>This is the FAQ for &os; versions &rel2.relx; and + &rel.relx;. Every effort has been made to make this FAQ as + informative as possible; if you have any suggestions as to how + it may be improved, please feel free to mail them to the + &a.doc;.</para> + + <para>The latest version of this document is always available from the <ulink url="http://www.FreeBSD.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/index.html">&os; website</ulink>. It may also be downloaded as one large <ulink url="book.html">HTML</ulink> file with HTTP or as a variety of other formats from the <ulink url="ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/doc/">&os; FTP - server</ulink>. You may also want to <ulink - url="&url.base;/search/index.html">Search the FAQ</ulink>.</para> + server</ulink>.</para> </abstract> </bookinfo> <chapter id="introduction"> <title>Introduction</title> - <para>Welcome to the &os; - &rel2.relx; - and &rel.relx; - - FAQ!</para> - - <para>As is usual with Usenet FAQs, this document aims to cover the - most frequently asked questions concerning the &os; operating - system (and of course answer them!). Although originally intended - to reduce bandwidth and avoid the same old questions being asked - over and over again, FAQs have become recognized as valuable - information resources.</para> - - <para>Every effort has been made to make this FAQ as informative as - possible; if you have any suggestions as to how it may be - improved, please feel free to mail them to the &a.doc;.</para> - <qandaset> <qandaentry> <question id="what-is-FreeBSD">
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