From owner-freebsd-bugs Thu Nov 21 6:50:34 2002 Delivered-To: freebsd-bugs@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id AFF2A37B401; Thu, 21 Nov 2002 06:50:33 -0800 (PST) Received: from clunix.cl.msu.edu (clunix.cl.msu.edu [35.9.2.10]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id E21A743E88; Thu, 21 Nov 2002 06:50:32 -0800 (PST) (envelope-from jerrymc@clunix.cl.msu.edu) Received: (from jerrymc@localhost) by clunix.cl.msu.edu (8.11.6+Sun/8.11.6) id gALEoV824013; Thu, 21 Nov 2002 09:50:31 -0500 (EST) From: Jerry McAllister Message-Id: <200211211450.gALEoV824013@clunix.cl.msu.edu> Subject: Re: misc/45493: Confusing comment in /etc/crontab To: ceri@FreeBSD.ORG Date: Thu, 21 Nov 2002 09:50:31 -0500 (EST) Cc: freebsd-bugs@FreeBSD.ORG In-Reply-To: <200211211350.gALDo3gp041080@freefall.freebsd.org> from "Ceri Davies" at Nov 21, 2002 05:50:03 AM X-Mailer: ELM [version 2.5 PL2] MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Sender: owner-freebsd-bugs@FreeBSD.ORG Precedence: bulk List-ID: List-Archive: (Web Archive) List-Help: (List Instructions) List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: X-Loop: FreeBSD.org > > > > If the comment needs to describe two cases, there should be two > > simpler sentences instead of one that doesn't quite cut it. I'd > > probably prefer this written as: > > > > # Adjust the time zone. See adjkerntz(8) for details. If your CMOS > > # clock is set to UTC instead of the local time, this does nothing. This is the best yet!! ////jerry > > Good. > > Ceri > -- > The stalwart Urgrosh has come! To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-bugs" in the body of the message