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Date:      Tue, 09 Sep 2003 00:30:59 +0200
From:      Christian Brueffer <chris@unixpages.org>
To:        Tom Rhodes <trhodes@freebsd.org>
Cc:        FreeBSD-doc@freebsd.org
Subject:   Re: Pre-commit review requested
Message-ID:  <20030908223058.GD19937@unixpages.org>
In-Reply-To: <20030908142254.3592ed0d.trhodes@FreeBSD.org>
References:  <20030908142254.3592ed0d.trhodes@FreeBSD.org>

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On Mon, Sep 08, 2003 at 02:22:54PM -0400, Tom Rhodes wrote:
> Any -doc committer want to review the following patch.  It is by no
> way an in depth cleanup, but it will take us (myself anyway) one
> step further toward my goal of a good security chapter.
>=20
> This diff:
>=20
> o Adds <application>, <acronym>, and other tags as required.
> o Uses the &os; entity.
> o Cleans up the introduction by pointing out what
>   version of Kerberos is in what FreeBSD Release.
> o Modifies <indexterm> and title's to help seperate KerberosIV and Kerber=
os5.
>=20
> I'm only looking for either objections or "please commit"s and would rath=
er
> not bounce this around for the next three days.  Thanks!
>=20

[patch]

Looks good to me.

- Christian

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