From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Sep 8 15:31:13 2003 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id D629716A4BF; Mon, 8 Sep 2003 15:31:13 -0700 (PDT) Received: from ms-dienst.rz.rwth-aachen.de (ms-1.rz.RWTH-Aachen.DE [134.130.3.130]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id D1D2E4401E; Mon, 8 Sep 2003 15:31:02 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from chris@unixpages.org) Received: from r220-1 (r220-1.rz.RWTH-Aachen.DE [134.130.3.31]) by ms-dienst.rz.rwth-aachen.de (iPlanet Messaging Server 5.2 HotFix 1.12 (built Feb 13 2003)) with ESMTP id <0HKX00E3Z2JP66@ms-dienst.rz.rwth-aachen.de>; Tue, 09 Sep 2003 00:31:01 +0200 (MEST) Received: from relay.RWTH-Aachen.DE ([134.130.3.1]) by r220-1 (MailMonitor for SMTP v1.2.2 ) ; Tue, 09 Sep 2003 00:31:00 +0200 (MEST) Received: from haakonia.hitnet.rwth-aachen.de (daemon@haakonia.hitnet.RWTH-Aachen.DE [137.226.181.92]) h88MV0ni025825; Tue, 09 Sep 2003 00:31:00 +0200 (MEST) Received: from gondor.middleearth (gondor.middleearth [192.168.1.42]) by haakonia.hitnet.rwth-aachen.de (Postfix) with ESMTP id 44EA71C; Mon, 08 Sep 2003 22:31:00 +0000 (GMT) Received: by gondor.middleearth (Postfix, from userid 1001) id 90B3744FC; Tue, 09 Sep 2003 00:30:59 +0200 (CEST) Date: Tue, 09 Sep 2003 00:30:59 +0200 From: Christian Brueffer In-reply-to: <20030908142254.3592ed0d.trhodes@FreeBSD.org> To: Tom Rhodes Message-id: <20030908223058.GD19937@unixpages.org> MIME-version: 1.0 Content-type: multipart/signed; boundary=Ycz6tD7Th1CMF4v7; protocol="application/pgp-signature"; micalg=pgp-sha1 Content-disposition: inline User-Agent: Mutt/1.4.1i X-Operating-System: FreeBSD 5.1-CURRENT X-PGP-Key: http://people.freebsd.org/~brueffer/brueffer.key.asc X-PGP-Fingerprint: A5C8 2099 19FF AACA F41B B29B 6C76 178C A0ED 982D References: <20030908142254.3592ed0d.trhodes@FreeBSD.org> cc: FreeBSD-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: Pre-commit review requested X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.1 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 08 Sep 2003 22:31:14 -0000 --Ycz6tD7Th1CMF4v7 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable On Mon, Sep 08, 2003 at 02:22:54PM -0400, Tom Rhodes wrote: > Any -doc committer want to review the following patch. It is by no > way an in depth cleanup, but it will take us (myself anyway) one > step further toward my goal of a good security chapter. >=20 > This diff: >=20 > o Adds , , and other tags as required. > o Uses the &os; entity. > o Cleans up the introduction by pointing out what > version of Kerberos is in what FreeBSD Release. > o Modifies and title's to help seperate KerberosIV and Kerber= os5. >=20 > I'm only looking for either objections or "please commit"s and would rath= er > not bounce this around for the next three days. Thanks! >=20 [patch] Looks good to me. - Christian --=20 Christian Brueffer chris@unixpages.org brueffer@FreeBSD.org GPG Key: http://people.freebsd.org/~brueffer/brueffer.key.asc GPG Fingerprint: A5C8 2099 19FF AACA F41B B29B 6C76 178C A0ED 982D --Ycz6tD7Th1CMF4v7 Content-Type: application/pgp-signature Content-Disposition: inline -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.2.2 (FreeBSD) iD8DBQE/XQMibHYXjKDtmC0RAujCAJ9r6LpU4c0ZK3EvmkNflPshoxJ2bACeMkd3 pL2j1ZRRjn5/+uqz57jAgyI= =nZ2o -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --Ycz6tD7Th1CMF4v7--