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Date:      Wed, 21 Sep 2005 17:27:38 +0200
From:      Pav Lucistnik <pav@FreeBSD.org>
To:        Joe Marcus Clarke <marcus@FreeBSD.org>
Cc:        cvs-ports@FreeBSD.org, ports-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org, portmgr@FreeBSD.org
Subject:   Re: Deprecating the signature at the end of pkg-descr
Message-ID:  <1127316458.58280.63.camel@pav.hide.vol.cz>
In-Reply-To: <43317B5F.7010500@FreeBSD.org>
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Joe Marcus Clarke p=ED=B9e v st 21. 09. 2005 v 11:25 -0400:

> Pav Lucistnik wrote:
>=20
> |
> | Index: book.sgml
> | =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=
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=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D
> | RCS file:
> /home/dcvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.sgml,v
> | retrieving revision 1.616
> | diff -a -u -r1.616 book.sgml
> | --- book.sgml	20 Sep 2005 22:23:31 -0000	1.616
> | +++ book.sgml	21 Sep 2005 14:41:59 -0000
> | @@ -165,18 +165,15 @@
> |  	      correctly.</para>
> |  	  </note>
> |
> | -	  <para>It is recommended that you sign your name at the end of this
> | -	    file, as in:</para>
> | +	  <para>The following example shows how your
> | +	    <filename>pkg-descr</filename> should look like:</para>
>=20
> how ... look like is improper and/or awkward English.  Either use "what
> ... look like" or drop the "like."

I dropped the "like". Thank you.

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Pav Lucistnik <pav@oook.cz>
              <pav@FreeBSD.org>

If God is perfect, why did He create discontinuous functions?

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