Date: Thu, 26 Aug 2010 09:30:13 -0700 From: Jason <jhelfman@e-e.com> To: Li <fender0107401@gmail.com> Cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: A seggestion about Chapter 29. Message-ID: <20100826163013.GJ19553@eggman.experts-exchange.com> In-Reply-To: <20100826154016.GA1720@PC-686.Workstation> References: <20100826154016.GA1720@PC-686.Workstation>
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--y0ulUmNC+osPPQO6 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8; format=flowed Content-Disposition: inline Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit I've attached a patch that should suffice. -j On Thu, Aug 26, 2010 at 11:40:16PM +0800, Li thus spake: >Hi all: > >FreeBSD Handbook -> Chapter 29 Network Servers -> >29.2 The inetd “Super-Server” -> 29.2.3 Command-Line Options: > >>Novice users may be pleased to note that these parameters usually >>do not need to be modified, although we mention the rate-limiting >>options below as they be useful should you find that you are >>receiving an excessive amount of connections. >>A full list of options can be found in the inetd(8) manual. > >I am not a native English speaker, but I think this sentence is too long. > >It may cause some confusion. > >So, I suggest some modify it. > > fender0107401 >_______________________________________________ >freebsd-doc@freebsd.org mailing list >http://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/listinfo/freebsd-doc >To unsubscribe, send any mail to "freebsd-doc-unsubscribe@freebsd.org" > --y0ulUmNC+osPPQO6 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: attachment; filename="patch.txt" --- handbook/network-servers/chapter.sgml.orig 2010-08-26 09:16:51.000000000 -0700 +++ handbook/network-servers/chapter.sgml 2010-08-26 09:27:33.000000000 -0700 @@ -196,12 +196,12 @@ single IP address from requesting any service more than 60 times in any given minute.</para> - <para>Novice users may be pleased to note that - these parameters usually do not need to be modified, - although we mention the rate-limiting options below as - they be useful should you find that you are receiving an - excessive amount of connections. A full list of options - can be found in the &man.inetd.8; manual.</para> + <para>Although we mention rate-limiting options below, novice + users may be pleased to note that these parameters usually + do not need to be modified. These options may be useful + should you find that you are receiving an excessive + amount of connections. A full list of options can be found + in the &man.inetd.8; manual.</para> <variablelist> <varlistentry> --y0ulUmNC+osPPQO6--
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