From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Thu Aug 18 00:30:14 2011 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 65556106566C for ; Thu, 18 Aug 2011 00:30:14 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::28]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 554A18FC0C for ; Thu, 18 Aug 2011 00:30:14 +0000 (UTC) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.14.4/8.14.4) with ESMTP id p7I0UE3s086668 for ; Thu, 18 Aug 2011 00:30:14 GMT (envelope-from gnats@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.14.4/8.14.4/Submit) id p7I0UEIM086665; Thu, 18 Aug 2011 00:30:14 GMT (envelope-from gnats) Date: Thu, 18 Aug 2011 00:30:14 GMT Message-Id: <201108180030.p7I0UEIM086665@freefall.freebsd.org> To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org From: Benjamin Kaduk Cc: Subject: Re: docs/159854: grammar updates for carp.4 X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list Reply-To: Benjamin Kaduk List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 18 Aug 2011 00:30:14 -0000 The following reply was made to PR docs/159854; it has been noted by GNATS. From: Benjamin Kaduk To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org Cc: Subject: Re: docs/159854: grammar updates for carp.4 Date: Wed, 17 Aug 2011 20:21:01 -0400 (EDT) This message is in MIME format. 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