Date: Thu, 26 Aug 2010 12:34:41 -0600 (MDT) From: Warren Block <wblock@wonkity.com> To: Jason <jhelfman@e-e.com> Cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org, Li <fender0107401@gmail.com> Subject: Re: A seggestion about Chapter 29. Message-ID: <alpine.BSF.2.00.1008261233170.36382@wonkity.com> In-Reply-To: <20100826163013.GJ19553@eggman.experts-exchange.com> References: <20100826154016.GA1720@PC-686.Workstation> <20100826163013.GJ19553@eggman.experts-exchange.com>
next in thread | previous in thread | raw e-mail | index | archive | help
On Thu, 26 Aug 2010, Jason wrote: > I've attached a patch that should suffice. > -j > > On Thu, Aug 26, 2010 at 11:40:16PM +0800, Li thus spake: >> Hi all: >> >> FreeBSD Handbook -> Chapter 29 Network Servers -> >> 29.2 The inetd ?Super-Server? -> 29.2.3 Command-Line Options: >> >>> Novice users may be pleased to note that these parameters usually >>> do not need to be modified, although we mention the rate-limiting >>> options below as they be useful should you find that you are >>> receiving an excessive amount of connections. >>> A full list of options can be found in the inetd(8) manual. >> >> I am not a native English speaker, but I think this sentence is too long. >> >> It may cause some confusion. >> >> So, I suggest some modify it. This is from a forums thread, where I posted a rewrite of that poor first sentence: http://forums.freebsd.org/showpost.php?p=99145&postcount=7
Want to link to this message? Use this URL: <https://mail-archive.FreeBSD.org/cgi/mid.cgi?alpine.BSF.2.00.1008261233170.36382>