Date: Sun, 29 Apr 2007 15:56:59 +0000 (UTC) From: Christian Brueffer <brueffer@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking chapter.sgml Message-ID: <200704291556.l3TFuxL6075845@repoman.freebsd.org>
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brueffer 2007-04-29 15:56:59 UTC
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Modified files:
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking
chapter.sgml
Log:
Reworded sentences to avoid second person usage, some grammar fixes,
other linguistic improvements.
Reviewed by: trhodes
Revision Changes Path
1.393 +16 -15 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml
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