Date: Tue, 20 Jan 2004 06:20:10 -0800 (PST) From: Ceri Davies <ceri@FreeBSD.org> To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: docs/61628: Mistake in Handbook, section 8.6.4 passwd Message-ID: <200401201420.i0KEKA6P058268@freefall.freebsd.org>
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The following reply was made to PR docs/61628; it has been noted by GNATS. From: Ceri Davies <ceri@FreeBSD.org> To: Marian Cerny <jojo@matfyz.cz> Cc: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: docs/61628: Mistake in Handbook, section 8.6.4 passwd Date: Tue, 20 Jan 2004 14:16:54 +0000 On Tue, Jan 20, 2004 at 05:18:33AM -0800, Marian Cerny wrote: > Users must type in ther original password before changing their > password, to prevent an unauthorized person from changing their password > when the user is away from their console. > > I think that "... their password, to prevent ..." should be written > without coma: "... their password to prevent ..." Losing the comma would result in a grammatically correct, though unwieldy, sentence. The easiest way to deal with is to move "before changing their password," to the beginning of the sentence. Ceri --
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