Date: Thu, 14 Jul 2005 21:57:39 +0300 From: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@freebsd.org> To: Tilman Linneweh <arved@arved.at> Cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: Small diff to ipv6 chapter Message-ID: <20050714185739.GA1191@beatrix.daedalusnetworks.priv> In-Reply-To: <20050714170633.GE19236@arved.at> References: <20050714170633.GE19236@arved.at>
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On 2005-07-14 19:06, Tilman Linneweh <arved@arved.at> wrote: > Hi, > Here is a small patch for the ipv6 chapter, please approver or commit When it makes sense, I prefer seeing commits that change <ulink> elements like this: <ulink url="http://example.net/">example.net</ulink>; to this: <ulink url="http://example.net/"></ulink>; This saves us typing, it's more difficult to get wrong (less duplication of text) and renders better in non-hypertext versions of the docs, where the link URL is not ``lost''. > - <para><ulink url="http://etherboot.sourceforge.net">Etherboot's Web > + <para><ulink url="http://etherboot.sourceforge.net/">Etherboot's Web Ok. I'd probaby prefer something that preserved the URL in non-hypertext output formats: <para>Etherboot, <ulink url="http://etherboot.sourceforge.net/"></para>; > - <para><ulink url="http://www.kame.net">KAME.net</ulink></para>; > + <para><ulink url="http://www.kame.net/">KAME.net</ulink></para>; Relatively ok. I'd probably prefer something like Etherboot above. > - <para><ulink url="http://www.6bone.net">6bone.net</ulink></para>; > + <para><ulink url="http://www.6bone.net/">6bone.net</ulink></para>; Relatively ok too. Same as above for the project name / homepage. > - involves setting up a GRE (gif) tunnel.</para> > + involves setting up an IP tunnel.</para> Ok. > - able to reach the IPv6 site <ulink url="http://www.kame.net">www.kame.net</ulink>; > - and see the dancing tortoise — that is if you have a IPv6 enabled browser such as > + able to reach the IPv6 site <ulink url="http://www.kame.net/">www.kame.net</ulink>; > + and see the dancing tortoise — that is if you have an IPv6 enabled browser such as The URL shouldn't be duplicated here.
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