Date: Wed, 17 Nov 2004 22:27:32 +0000 From: Murray Stokely <murray@freebsd.org> To: Joel Dahl <joel@automatvapen.se> Cc: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: docs/70583: [PATCH] Update freebsd-glossary Message-ID: <20041117222732.GA96501@hub.freebsd.org> In-Reply-To: <200408201640.i7KGePeA034000@freefall.freebsd.org> References: <200408201640.i7KGePeA034000@freefall.freebsd.org>
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Hi Joel, thanks for the submissions. I've noticed that many of your submissions don't use a serial comma so they stick out when compared with the rest of our documentation set. Please see : http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style.html#WRITING-STYLE-GUIDE > <glossterm>Unix File System Version 2</glossterm> > <acronym>UFS2</acronym> > <glossdef> > - <para></para> > + <para>An extension to <acronym>UFS1</acronym>, introduced in > + &os; 5-CURRENT. <acronym>UFS2</acronym> adds 64 bit block > + pointers (breaking the 1T barrier), support for extended file > + storage, and a few other things. extended file attributes, and other enhancements. ? > + </para> > </glossdef> > </glossdiv> > @@ -1762,7 +1775,10 @@ > <glossterm>Virtual Private Network</glossterm> > <acronym>VPN</acronym> > <glossdef> > - <para></para> > + <para>A way to use a public telecommunication > + infrastructure, such as the Internet, to provide remote > + users with a secure connection to their organizations organization's ? Murray
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