Date: Sun, 20 Feb 2005 14:33:00 +0100 (CET) From: Siebrand Mazeland <s.mazeland@xs4all.nl> To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Subject: docs/77775: [PATCH] More contractions in handbook removed Message-ID: <20050220133300.D1FAB61C35@nfishbone.nitro.dk> Resent-Message-ID: <200502201340.j1KDeU6U033729@freefall.freebsd.org>
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>Number: 77775
>Category: docs
>Synopsis: [PATCH] More contractions in handbook removed
>Confidential: no
>Severity: non-critical
>Priority: low
>Responsible: freebsd-doc
>State: open
>Quarter:
>Keywords:
>Date-Required:
>Class: update
>Submitter-Id: current-users
>Arrival-Date: Sun Feb 20 13:40:29 GMT 2005
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator: Siebrand Mazeland
>Release: FreeBSD 5.3-RELEASE-p4 i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD nfishbone.nitro.dk 5.3-RELEASE-p4 FreeBSD 5.3-RELEASE-p4 #1: Sun Jan 16 03:35:01 CET 2005 simon@nfishbone.nitro.dk:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/FISHBONE i386
>Description:
Joeld inspired me to do some more nitpicking on the Handbook
>How-To-Repeat:
>Fix:
? en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls/chapter_white.sgml
Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls/chapter.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.37
diff -u -r1.37 chapter.sgml
--- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls/chapter.sgml 19 Feb 2005 14:03:54 -0000 1.37
+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls/chapter.sgml 20 Feb 2005 13:19:14 -0000
@@ -1451,7 +1451,7 @@
block in quick on dc0 from 224.0.0.0/3 to any #Class D & E multicast
##### Block a bunch of different nasty things. ############
-# That I don't want to see in the log
+# That I do not want to see in the log
# Block frags
block in quick on dc0 all with frags
Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.126
diff -u -r1.126 chapter.sgml
--- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.sgml 13 Feb 2005 10:24:09 -0000 1.126
+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.sgml 20 Feb 2005 13:21:19 -0000
@@ -497,8 +497,8 @@
<title>Configuring the <application>sendmail</application>
Access Database</title>
- <programlisting>cyberspammer.com 550 We don't accept mail from spammers
-FREE.STEALTH.MAILER@ 550 We don't accept mail from spammers
+ <programlisting>cyberspammer.com 550 We do not accept mail from spammers
+FREE.STEALTH.MAILER@ 550 We do not accept mail from spammers
another.source.of.spam REJECT
okay.cyberspammer.com OK
128.32 RELAY</programlisting>
Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.263
diff -u -r1.263 chapter.sgml
--- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml 19 Feb 2005 14:03:54 -0000 1.263
+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml 20 Feb 2005 13:22:02 -0000
@@ -3838,7 +3838,7 @@
<para>That is, the <emphasis>public</emphasis> IP address of the remote end,
whitespace, and a text string that provides the secret.
- Obviously, you shouldn't use <quote>secret</quote> as your key -- the normal
+ Obviously, you should not use <quote>secret</quote> as your key -- the normal
rules for choosing a password apply.</para>
<para>On gateway host #2 the line would look like this</para>
>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
>Unformatted:
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