Date: Fri, 20 Jul 2001 15:19:11 -0700 (PDT) From: Murray Stokely <murray@FreeBSD.org> To: cvs-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config chapter.sgml Message-ID: <200107202219.f6KMJB618266@freefall.freebsd.org>
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murray 2001/07/20 15:19:11 PDT
Modified files:
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config chapter.sgml
Log:
* Move attribution information into <chapterinfo>
* Remove myself from list of chapter authors, since I didn't really add
very much.
* Add more <filename> and <varname> tags
* Use <varname> instead of <literal> around sysctl names
* Reword references to look better without the benefit of a hyperlink
- <para>Please see &man.ata.4;.</para>
+ <para>For more information, please see &man.ata.4;.</para>
* Use 'SoftUpdates' consistently.
* Saying that an "error message shows up in dmesg" is a bit cryptic for
new users, so explain that messages get sent to a system buffer that
is viewed with the dmesg command.
Revision Changes Path
1.9 +75 -46 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.sgml
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