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Date:      Mon, 22 Jul 2013 21:25:08 +0000 (UTC)
From:      Warren Block <wblock@FreeBSD.org>
To:        doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org
Subject:   svn commit: r42386 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview
Message-ID:  <201307222125.r6MLP803025566@svn.freebsd.org>

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Author: wblock
Date: Mon Jul 22 21:25:08 2013
New Revision: 42386
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42386

Log:
  Whitespace-only fixes.  Translators, please ignore.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview/chapter.xml	Mon Jul 22 21:23:03 2013	(r42385)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview/chapter.xml	Mon Jul 22 21:25:08 2013	(r42386)
@@ -137,12 +137,12 @@
     <title>Quick Start</title>
 
     <para>Some preparatory steps must be taken before editing the &os;
-      documentation.  First, subscribe to the &a.doc;.
-      Some team members also interact on the
-      <literal>#bsddocs</literal>
+      documentation.  First, subscribe to the &a.doc;.  Some team
+      members also interact on the <literal>#bsddocs</literal>
       <acronym>IRC</acronym> channel on
       <ulink url="http://www.efnet.org/">EFnet</ulink>.  These people
-      can help with questions or problems involving the documentation.</para>
+      can help with questions or problems involving the
+      documentation.</para>
 
     <procedure>
       <step>
@@ -153,9 +153,10 @@
       </step>
 
       <step>
-	<para>Install a local working copy of the documentation
-	  from a mirror of the &os; repository in
-	  <filename class="directory">~/doc</filename> (see <xref linkend="working-copy"/>).</para>
+	<para>Install a local working copy of the documentation from a
+	  mirror of the &os; repository in
+	  <filename class="directory">~/doc</filename> (see
+	  <xref linkend="working-copy"/>).</para>
 
 	<screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>svn checkout https://<replaceable>svn0.us-west.FreeBSD.org</replaceable>/doc/head <replaceable>~/doc</replaceable></userinput></screen>
       </step>
@@ -205,7 +206,8 @@
 
 	<para>Review the output and edit the file to fix any problems
 	  shown, then rerun the command to find any remaining
-	  problems.  Repeat until all of the errors are resolved.</para>
+	  problems.  Repeat until all of the errors are
+	  resolved.</para>
       </step>
 
       <step>



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