Date: Sun, 21 Jul 2013 01:36:45 +0000 (UTC) From: Warren Block <wblock@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r42336 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/docbook-markup Message-ID: <201307210136.r6L1ajK0014620@svn.freebsd.org>
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Author: wblock Date: Sun Jul 21 01:36:45 2013 New Revision: 42336 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42336 Log: Refine and correct the acronym example. Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/docbook-markup/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/docbook-markup/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/docbook-markup/chapter.xml Sun Jul 21 00:45:18 2013 (r42335) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/docbook-markup/chapter.xml Sun Jul 21 01:36:45 2013 (r42336) @@ -1307,12 +1307,13 @@ This is the file called 'foo2'</screen> <para>Usage:</para> <programlisting><sgmltag class="starttag">para</sgmltag>FreeBSD is without doubt <sgmltag class="starttag">emphasis</sgmltag>the<sgmltag class="endtag">emphasis</sgmltag> - premiere Unix like operating system for the Intel architecture.<sgmltag class="endtag">para</sgmltag></programlisting> + premiere &unix;-like operating system for the Intel + architecture.<sgmltag class="endtag">para</sgmltag></programlisting> <para>Appearance:</para> <para>FreeBSD is without doubt <emphasis>the</emphasis> - premiere Unix like operating system for the Intel + premiere &unix;-like operating system for the Intel architecture.</para> </example> </sect2> @@ -1334,17 +1335,17 @@ This is the file called 'foo2'</screen> <programlisting><sgmltag class="starttag">para</sgmltag>Request For Comments (<sgmltag class="starttag">acronym</sgmltag>RFC<sgmltag class="endtag">acronym</sgmltag>) 1149 defined the use of avian carriers for transmission of - Internet Protocol (<sgmltag class="starttag">acronym</sgmltag>IP<sgmltag class="endtag">acronym</sgmltag>) data - transmission. The quantity of <sgmltag class="starttag">acronym</sgmltag>IP<sgmltag class="endtag">acronym</sgmltag> data - transmitted since then is unknown.<sgmltag class="endtag">para</sgmltag></programlisting> + Internet Protocol (<sgmltag class="starttag">acronym</sgmltag>IP<sgmltag class="endtag">acronym</sgmltag>) data. The + quantity of <sgmltag class="starttag">acronym</sgmltag>IP<sgmltag class="endtag">acronym</sgmltag> data currently + transmitted in that manner is unknown.<sgmltag class="endtag">para</sgmltag></programlisting> <para>Appearance:</para> <para>Request For Comments (<acronym>RFC</acronym>) 1149 defined the use of avian carriers for transmission of - Internet Protocol (<acronym>IP</acronym>) data - transmission. The quantity of <acronym>IP</acronym> data - transmitted since then is unknown.</para> + Internet Protocol (<acronym>IP</acronym>) data. The + quantity of <acronym>IP</acronym> data currently + transmitted in that manner is unknown.</para> </example> </sect2>
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