Date: Mon, 20 Mar 2006 13:13:52 +0300 From: "Andrew Pantyukhin" <infofarmer@gmail.com> To: "Grant Moritz" <volunteer@avcon.org.au> Cc: questions@freebsd.org Subject: Re: Mistake in FreeBSD manual Message-ID: <cb5206420603200213w70a0b634m3a9a3c8ec627e5dd@mail.gmail.com> In-Reply-To: <441E7BFA.4000600@avcon.org.au> References: <441E7BFA.4000600@avcon.org.au>
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On 3/20/06, Grant Moritz <volunteer@avcon.org.au> wrote: > > Hey, > In the FreeBSD manual > ([1]http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network- > inetd.html) under the section "25.2.5 Security" at the end of the > first paragraph there is an error in grammar. > "Some daemons, such as fingerd, may not be desired at all because they > information that may be useful to an attacker." > Doesn't make sense to me just thought I would pass along the > observation you guys. > Thanks, > SectorX4 > > References > > 1. http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-i= netd.html > _______________________________________________ > freebsd-questions@freebsd.org mailing list > http://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/listinfo/freebsd-questions > To unsubscribe, send any mail to "freebsd-questions-unsubscribe@freebsd.o= rg" > What a show-stopper :-) I think that an average english reader would not notice that, inserting the word "provide" subconciously. Please have a look at fdp-primer: http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/index.html to learn how to write and patch documentation, then you can correct the mistake and send-pr. Thanks!
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