Date: Mon, 11 Apr 2005 04:40:42 -0500 (CDT) From: Mark Linimon <linimon@lonesome.com> To: "Simon L. Nielsen" <simon@FreeBSD.org> Cc: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: CFD: additions to the PR submission article Message-ID: <Pine.LNX.4.44.0504110437400.2500-100000@pancho> In-Reply-To: <20050411092513.GB71160@eddie.nitro.dk>
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On Mon, 11 Apr 2005, Simon L. Nielsen wrote: > > + </listitem> > > + > > No need for an empty line here. Hmm, then the style is wrong elsewhere in the article. > > + <para>Then you should ascertain whether or not the problem is > > + timely. There are few things > > This line could be made longer. Weak attempt at a diff reduction on the next line. OTOH since I moved the block that that line was in to make the emphasis clearer, it may not make any difference. > > + <ulink url="http://www.freebsd.org/security/">list of supported > > s/freebsd.org/FreeBSD.org/ Also wrong elsewhere IIRC. I can make these suggested changes when I commit, and then go back and fix the other ones in a separate checkin to make them consistent. mcl
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