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Date:      Tue, 19 Feb 2013 23:14:00 +0100
From:      Jeremie Le Hen <jlh@FreeBSD.org>
To:        Eitan Adler <eadler@freebsd.org>
Cc:        svn-doc-head@freebsd.org, Glen Barber <gjb@freebsd.org>, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, doc-committers@freebsd.org
Subject:   Re: svn commit: r40980 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/printing
Message-ID:  <20130219221400.GC92116@felucia.tataz.chchile.org>
In-Reply-To: <CAF6rxgmB-ZyfaZOJcP_sCX8zX_OopbJ=WXb1Cuj-rnt7W7yx7A@mail.gmail.com>
References:  <201302161543.r1GFh9Ek038848@svn.freebsd.org> <20130219215627.GB92116@felucia.tataz.chchile.org> <20130219220417.GC1514@glenbarber.us> <CAF6rxgmB-ZyfaZOJcP_sCX8zX_OopbJ=WXb1Cuj-rnt7W7yx7A@mail.gmail.com>

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On Tue, Feb 19, 2013 at 05:06:18PM -0500, Eitan Adler wrote:
> 
> I did not intend to offend anyone and if I did, I apologize.
> 
> Perhaps any of the following?
> 
> "Twiddle with a poorly worded sentence."
> "Make this sentence more clear"
> or
> "Avoid references to the first person and clarify sentence."

Yes.  Basically, let's try to be as neutral as possible.

Thank you very much for your understanding :).

Regards,
-- 
Jeremie Le Hen

Scientists say the world is made up of Protons, Neutrons and Electrons.
They forgot to mention Morons.



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