Date: Tue, 22 Feb 2005 14:40:22 GMT From: "Jesus R. Camou" <jcamou@cox.net> To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: docs/77926: [PATCH] update FDP Primer book word list Message-ID: <200502221440.j1MEeMns094362@freefall.freebsd.org>
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The following reply was made to PR docs/77926; it has been noted by GNATS.
From: "Jesus R. Camou" <jcamou@cox.net>
To: Marc Fonvieille <blackend@FreeBSD.org>
Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: Re: docs/77926: [PATCH] update FDP Primer book word list
Date: Tue, 22 Feb 2005 07:33:44 -0700
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On Tue, Feb 22, 2005 at 03:15:41PM +0100, Marc Fonvieille wrote:
> On Tue, Feb 22, 2005 at 06:53:18AM -0700, Jesus R. Camou wrote:
> >
> > >Number: 77926
> > >Category: docs
> > >Synopsis: [PATCH] update FDP Primer book word list
> > >Confidential: no
> > >Severity: non-critical
> > >Priority: medium
> > >Responsible: freebsd-doc
> > >State: open
> > >Quarter:
> > >Keywords:
> > >Date-Required:
> > >Class: update
> > >Submitter-Id: current-users
> > >Arrival-Date: Tue Feb 22 14:00:22 GMT 2005
> > >Closed-Date:
> > >Last-Modified:
> > >Originator: Jesus R. Camou
> > >Release: FreeBSD 4.11-STABLE i386
> > >Organization:
> > >Environment:
> > System: FreeBSD opensea.mephis.org 4.11-STABLE FreeBSD 4.11-STABLE #0: Sun Feb 13 21:22:53 MST 2005 jcamou@opensea.mephis.org:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/HACKED i386
> >
> > >Description:
> >
> > Update the word list in the FDP Primer with the
> > capitalization of the Ports Collection.
> >
> > >How-To-Repeat:
> > >Fix:
> >
> > --- writingstyle.diff begins here ---
> > Index: chapter.sgml
> > ===================================================================
> > RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.sgml,v
> > retrieving revision 1.43
> > diff -u -r1.43 chapter.sgml
> > --- chapter.sgml 20 Feb 2005 16:57:00 -0000 1.43
> > +++ chapter.sgml 22 Feb 2005 01:29:17 -0000
> > @@ -456,7 +456,7 @@
> > </listitem>
> >
> > <listitem>
> > - <para>ports collection</para>
> > + <para>Ports Pollection</para>
> > </listitem>
> >
>
> This seems to be redundant with the "FreeBSD Ports Collection" entry,
> ealier in the document. And I wonder about the revision 1.16 of this
> list where both "FreeBSD Ports Collection" and ""ports collection" have
> been added, maybe Murray and/or Chern may say something on that.
> This is another example of docproj history, I mean, as with CDROM which
> came from Walnut Creeks CDROM boxes (have a look to freebsdmall CD sets
> too), this is not a typo but a choice.
I requested this change to have an order of how words should be spelled.
Both ways are used throughout the doc/ tree, it would look better if
there were only one way of writing it from now on. Some replacements has
been made lately for the capitalization way. Plus, oh my, there's a
typo on my patch. I'll attach a corrected patch just in case it is
decided to be committed.
--
Jesus R. Camou <jcamou@COX.net>
jcamou@es.FreeBSD.org
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Index: writing-style/chapter.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.43
diff -u -r1.43 chapter.sgml
--- writing-style/chapter.sgml 20 Feb 2005 16:57:00 -0000 1.43
+++ writing-style/chapter.sgml 22 Feb 2005 14:29:20 -0000
@@ -456,7 +456,7 @@
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>ports collection</para>
+ <para>Ports Collection</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
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