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Date:      Thu, 21 Feb 2013 23:06:37 -0500 (EST)
From:      Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@MIT.EDU>
To:        Warren Block <wblock@wonkity.com>
Cc:        svn-doc-head@freebsd.org, Dru Lavigne <dru@freebsd.org>, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, doc-committers@freebsd.org
Subject:   Re: svn commit: r41024 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/users
Message-ID:  <alpine.GSO.1.10.1302212306090.9389@multics.mit.edu>
In-Reply-To: <alpine.BSF.2.00.1302211739010.91219@wonkity.com>
References:  <201302211406.r1LE66bl041470@svn.freebsd.org> <alpine.GSO.1.10.1302211348170.9389@multics.mit.edu> <alpine.BSF.2.00.1302211739010.91219@wonkity.com>

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On Thu, 21 Feb 2013, Warren Block wrote:

> On Thu, 21 Feb 2013, Benjamin Kaduk wrote:
>
>> On Thu, 21 Feb 2013, Dru Lavigne wrote:
>> 
>>> @@ -700,11 +683,9 @@ passwd: done</screen>
>>>       <secondary>quotas</secondary>
>>>     </indexterm>
>>>     <indexterm><primary>disk quotas</primary></indexterm>
>>> -    <para>Disk quotas limit disk usage to users, and
>>> -      they
>>> -      provide a way to quickly check that usage without
>>> -      calculating it every time.  Quotas are discussed in <xref
>>> -	linkend="quotas"/>.</para>
>>> +    <para>Disk quotas limit disk usage to users and provide a way to
>>> +      quickly check that usage without calculating it every time.
>> 
>> This sentence is still not quite there.
>> Maybe "Disk quotas limit the disk usage available to users" or "limit the 
>> disk usage of users"?
>
> "Disk quotas limit the amount of disk space available to users"

Sounds good, thanks.

-Ben



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