Date: Thu, 30 Jul 2009 14:14:49 +0200 From: Johan Kuuse <kuuse@redantigua.com> To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: freebsd-doc Digest, Vol 331, Issue 4 Message-ID: <1248956089.1316.68.camel@m20.> In-Reply-To: <20090730120024.AA78B10656F9@hub.freebsd.org> References: <20090730120024.AA78B10656F9@hub.freebsd.org>
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> Date: Wed, 29 Jul 2009 16:01:51 GMT > From: Glen Barber <glen.j.barber@gmail.com> > Subject: docs/137243: [patch] Minor grammatical fixes to Handbook > Section 24.2.2 > To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org > Message-ID: <200907291601.n6TG1ptk082497@www.freebsd.org> > > > >Number: 137243 > >Category: docs > >Synopsis: [patch] Minor grammatical fixes to Handbook Section 24.2.2 > >Confidential: no > >Severity: non-critical > >Priority: low > >Responsible: freebsd-doc > >State: open > >Quarter: > >Keywords: > >Date-Required: > >Class: doc-bug > >Submitter-Id: current-users > >Arrival-Date: Wed Jul 29 16:10:04 UTC 2009 > >Closed-Date: > >Last-Modified: > >Originator: Glen Barber > >Release: 8.0-BETA2 > >Organization: > >Environment: > FreeBSD orion 8.0-BETA2 FreeBSD 8.0-BETA2 #11 r195886: Sun Jul 26 05:27:01 EDT 2009 root@orion:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/ORION i386 > >Description: > Section 24.2.2 [1] of the handbook contains minor grammatical errors. The handbook states the following: > "This entry states that once every day, the freebsd-update will be ran." > > This should either be: > > a - This entry states that once every day, freebsd-update will run. > > or > > b - This entry states that once every day, the freebsd-update utility will be run. > > > [1] - http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/updating-upgrading-freebsdupdate.html > >How-To-Repeat: > > >Fix: > The attached patch contains a grammatical fix for the handbook, assuming the first case in the description of this PR > > > > > Patch attached with submission follows: > > --- cutting-edge/chapter.sgml.orig 2009-07-29 11:46:13.000000000 -0400 > +++ cutting-edge/chapter.sgml 2009-07-29 11:50:23.000000000 -0400 > @@ -281,8 +281,8 @@ > > <programlisting>@daily root freebsd-update cron</programlisting> > > - <para>This entry states that once every day, the > - <command>freebsd-update</command> will be ran. In this way, > + <para>This entry states that once every day, > + <command>freebsd-update</command> will run. In this way, > using the <option>cron</option> argument, > <command>freebsd-update</command> will only check if updates > exist. If patches exist, they will automatically be downloaded > > > >Release-Note: > >Audit-Trail: > >Unformatted: The crontab examples itself has an incorrect syntax: BAD (current example): @daily root freebsd-update cron Working example: @daily /usr/sbin/freebsd-update cron Regards, Johan
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