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Date:      Mon, 14 Apr 2014 15:59:34 +0000 (UTC)
From:      Dru Lavigne <dru@FreeBSD.org>
To:        doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org
Subject:   svn commit: r44551 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install
Message-ID:  <201404141559.s3EFxY6O008871@svn.freebsd.org>

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Author: dru
Date: Mon Apr 14 15:59:33 2014
New Revision: 44551
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/44551

Log:
  Fix a few grammos.
  
  Sponsored by:	iXsystems

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.xml	Mon Apr 14 15:52:42 2014	(r44550)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.xml	Mon Apr 14 15:59:33 2014	(r44551)
@@ -243,7 +243,6 @@
 
 	      <entry>0x1f0</entry>
 
-	      <entry/>
 	    </row>
 
 	    <row>
@@ -3565,7 +3564,7 @@ Retype new password :</screen>
 	</mediaobject>
       </figure>
 
-      <para><acronym>RPC</acronym>. communication between
+      <para><acronym>RPC</acronym> communication between
 	<acronym>NFS</acronym> servers and clients is managed by
 	&man.rpcbind.8; which is required for <acronym>NFS</acronym>
 	servers to operate correctly.  Status monitoring is provided
@@ -4265,7 +4264,7 @@ Please press any key to reboot.</screen>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-	<para>A tape will be be used to install &os;.</para>
+	<para>A tape will be used to install &os;.</para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
 
@@ -4285,7 +4284,6 @@ Please press any key to reboot.</screen>
 
 	  <para>The ISO images for each release can be downloaded from
 	    <filename>ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/ISO-IMAGES-<replaceable>arch</replaceable>/<replaceable>version</replaceable></filename>;
-	    or the closest mirror.
 	    or the closest mirror.  Substitute
 	    <replaceable>arch</replaceable> and
 	    <replaceable>version</replaceable> as appropriate.</para>



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