Date: Wed, 16 Apr 2014 18:27:11 +0000 (UTC) From: Dru Lavigne <dru@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r44584 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers Message-ID: <201404161827.s3GIRBYm059704@svn.freebsd.org>
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Author: dru Date: Wed Apr 16 18:27:11 2014 New Revision: 44584 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/44584 Log: Fix a few typos and redundancy. Sponsored by: iXsystems Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml Wed Apr 16 18:10:02 2014 (r44583) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.xml Wed Apr 16 18:27:11 2014 (r44584) @@ -303,8 +303,8 @@ server-program-arguments</programlisting <para><option>wait|nowait</option> indicates whether or not the service is able to handle its own socket. - <option>dgram</option> socket types must use the - <option>wait</option> option while + <option>dgram</option> socket types must use + <option>wait</option> while <option>stream</option> daemons, which are usually multi-threaded, should use <option>nowait</option>. <option>wait</option> usually hands off multiple sockets @@ -746,8 +746,8 @@ mountd_flags="-r"</programlisting> <para>The client now has everything it needs to mount a remote file system. In these examples, the server's name is <systemitem>server</systemitem> and the client's name is - <systemitem>client</systemitem>. To mount the - <filename>/home</filename> file system on + <systemitem>client</systemitem>. To mount + <filename>/home</filename> on <systemitem>server</systemitem> to the <filename>/mnt</filename> mount point on <systemitem>client</systemitem>:</para> @@ -1898,7 +1898,7 @@ INTERNS (,able,test-domain) (,baker, <indexterm><primary>netgroups</primary></indexterm> <para>Netgroup names longer than 8 characters should not be The names are case sensitive and using capital letters - letters for netgroup names is an easy way to distinguish + for netgroup names is an easy way to distinguish between user, machine and netgroup names.</para> <para>Some non-&os; <acronym>NIS</acronym> clients cannot @@ -1977,7 +1977,7 @@ ellington&prompt.user; <userinput>ypcat <literal>+@IT_EMP:::::::::</literal>. Otherwise, all user accounts imported from <acronym>NIS</acronym> will have <filename>/sbin/nologin</filename> as their login - shell and noone will be able to login to the system.</para> + shell and no one will be able to login to the system.</para> <para>To configure the less important servers, replace the old <literal>+:::::::::</literal> on the servers with these @@ -2348,7 +2348,7 @@ allow bind_v2</programlisting> <option>cn=Manager</option>. Before saving this file, place the <option>rootpw</option> in front of the password output from <command>slappasswd</command> and delete the old - <option>rootpw</option> option above. The end result should + <option>rootpw</option>. The end result should look similar to this:</para> <programlisting>TLSCipherSuite HIGH:MEDIUM:+SSLv3 @@ -4635,7 +4635,7 @@ AddModule mod_php5.c <application>MySQL</application>, or <application>SQLite</application> databases, with the default being <application>SQLite</application>. To change - the datbase engine, type <command>make config</command> + the database engine, type <command>make config</command> within <filename>/usr/ports/www/py-django</filename>, then install the port.</para> @@ -4677,7 +4677,7 @@ AddModule mod_php5.c source web framework that provides a full development stack. It is optimized to make web developers more productive and capable of writing powerful applications quickly. On &os;, - tt can be installed using the + it can be installed using the <package>www/rubygem-rails</package> package or port.</para> <para>Refer to <uri @@ -4882,15 +4882,15 @@ AddModule mod_php5.c <filename>/usr/local/etc/smb.conf</filename> and customized before <application>Samba</application> can be used.</para> - <para>The <filename>smb.conf</filename> file contains runtime - configuration information for - <application>Samba</application>, such as definitions of the + <para>Runtime configuration information for + <application>Samba</application> is found in + <filename>smb.conf</filename>, such as definitions of the printers and <quote>file system shares</quote> that will be shared with &windows; clients. The <application>Samba</application> package includes a web based tool called <application>swat</application> which provides a - simple way of configuring the <filename>smb.conf</filename> - file.</para> + simple way for configuring + <filename>smb.conf</filename>.</para> <sect3> <title>Using the Samba Web Administration Tool (SWAT)</title> @@ -4960,8 +4960,8 @@ AddModule mod_php5.c <term><literal>server string</literal></term> <listitem> - <para>The string that will be displayed with the - <command>net view</command> command and some other + <para>The string that will be displayed in the output of + <command>net view</command> and some other networking tools that seek to display descriptive text about the server.</para> </listitem> @@ -5019,8 +5019,8 @@ AddModule mod_php5.c </variablelist> <para>Assuming that the default <literal>smbpasswd</literal> - backend is used, the - <filename>/usr/local/etc/samba/smbpasswd</filename> file + backend is used, + <filename>/usr/local/etc/samba/smbpasswd</filename> must be created to allow <application>Samba</application> to authenticate clients. To provide &unix; user accounts access from &windows; clients, use the following command to @@ -5557,7 +5557,7 @@ iqn.2012-06.com.example:target0 </sect3> <sect3> - <title>Connecting to a Target With a Configuration + <title>Connecting to a Target with a Configuration File</title> <para>To connect using a configuration file, create
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