Date: Sun, 13 Jan 2013 06:02:31 +0000 (UTC) From: Eitan Adler <eadler@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r40600 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq Message-ID: <201301130602.r0D62Voo028655@svn.freebsd.org>
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Author: eadler Date: Sun Jan 13 06:02:31 2013 New Revision: 40600 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/40600 Log: Reduce and subtract extra words. Approved by: bcr (mentor) Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml Sun Jan 13 06:00:25 2013 (r40599) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml Sun Jan 13 06:02:31 2013 (r40600) @@ -6996,8 +6996,8 @@ deny pred1 deflate deflate24 protocomp a to see a hangup from the server.</para> <para>This can be avoided by allowing the peer to start - negotiating with the following line in your - <filename>ppp.conf</filename> file:</para> + negotiating with the following line in + <filename>ppp.conf</filename>:</para> <programlisting>set openmode passive</programlisting> @@ -7103,8 +7103,8 @@ deny pred1 deflate deflate24 protocomp a appear to have frozen. This is because &man.ppp.8; is waiting for the command to complete.</para> - <para>If you wish to execute commands like this, use the - <command>!bg</command> command instead. This will execute + <para>To execute commands like this, use + <command>!bg</command> instead. This will execute the given command in the background, and &man.ppp.8; can continue to service the link.</para> </answer>
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