Date: Fri, 4 Oct 2013 04:22:27 +0000 (UTC) From: Eitan Adler <eadler@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r42819 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs Message-ID: <201310040422.r944MRBw059254@svn.freebsd.org>
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Author: eadler Date: Fri Oct 4 04:22:26 2013 New Revision: 42819 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42819 Log: Simplify some of the text on the home page. Submitted by: Allan Jude <freebsd@allanjude.com> Discussed with: wblock, bjk, jhs Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/index.xsl Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/index.xsl ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/index.xsl Thu Oct 3 22:53:06 2013 (r42818) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/index.xsl Fri Oct 4 04:22:26 2013 (r42819) @@ -35,27 +35,23 @@ <div id="frontfeatureleft"> <div id="frontfeaturecontent"> - <h1> - Based on BSD &unix; - </h1> - - <p>FreeBSD® is an advanced - operating system for modern server, - desktop, and embedded computer <a - href="&base;/platforms/">platforms</a>. - FreeBSD's code base has undergone - over thirty years of continuous - development, improvement, and - optimization. It is developed and - maintained by a <a - href="&base;/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributors/staff-committers.html">large - team of individuals</a>. FreeBSD - provides advanced networking, - impressive security features, and - world class performance and is used - by some of the world's <a - href="&base;/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/nutshell.html#introduction-nutshell-users">busiest - web sites</a> and most pervasive + <h1>The &os; Project</h1> + + <p>&os; is an advanced computer + operating system used to power + modern servers, desktops and + embedded + <a href="&base;/platforms/">platforms</a>. + A large + <a + href="&base;/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributors/staff-committers.html">community</a> + has continually developed it for + more than thirty years. Its advanced + networking, security and storage + features have made &os; the platform + of choice for many of the + <a href="&base;/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/nutshell.html#introduction-nutshell-users">busiest web sites</a> + and most pervasive embedded networking and storage devices.</p> @@ -72,7 +68,7 @@ <div class="frontgetroundbox"> <div class="frontgettop"><div><b style="display: none">.</b></div></div> <div class="frontgetcontent"> - <a href="&base;/where.html">Get FreeBSD Now</a> + <a href="&base;/where.html">Download &os;</a> </div> <!-- frontgetcontent --> <div class="frontgetbot"><div><b style="display: none">.</b></div></div> </div> <!-- frontgetroundbox --> @@ -237,7 +233,7 @@ <div id="frontmedia"> <div id="frontmediacontent" class="txtnewsevent"> - <h2>IN THE MEDIA</h2> + <h2>PRESS</h2> <div class="newseventswrap"> <xsl:call-template name="html-index-news-press-items">
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