Date: Sat, 13 Jul 2013 17:13:15 -0600 (MDT) From: Warren Block <wblock@wonkity.com> To: Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@MIT.EDU> Cc: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, doc-committers@freebsd.org, Warren Block <wblock@freebsd.org> Subject: Re: svn commit: r42266 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security Message-ID: <alpine.BSF.2.00.1307131711550.63989@wonkity.com> In-Reply-To: <alpine.GSO.1.10.1307131723450.26275@multics.mit.edu> References: <201307130333.r6D3XLuD063885@svn.freebsd.org> <alpine.GSO.1.10.1307131723450.26275@multics.mit.edu>
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On Sat, 13 Jul 2013, Benjamin Kaduk wrote: > On Sat, 13 Jul 2013, Warren Block wrote: > >> Author: wblock >> Date: Sat Jul 13 03:33:20 2013 >> New Revision: 42266 >> URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42266 >> >> Log: >> Fix a wording bug: action to resource. Also fix some title >> capitalization and redundancy issues. >> >> Submitted by: MNIHKLOM (forum user, action/resource issue) >> >> Modified: >> head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml >> >> Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml >> ============================================================================== >> --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml Sat Jul 13 >> 01:50:56 2013 (r42265) >> +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml Sat Jul 13 >> 03:33:20 2013 (r42266) >> @@ -3744,7 +3744,7 @@ VII. References <co id="co-ref"/></progr >> Potentially a single, more constrained user would require >> an additional label added, the resource database needs to be >> built using <command>cap_mkdb</command>, edits made to >> - the <filename>/etc/master.passwd</filename> file. In >> + <filename>/etc/master.passwd</filename>. In > > This sentence seems rather confused. My best guess is that there used to be > a list of three things, and the last one was removed sloppily. How about this: Potentially a single, more constrained user would require an additional label to be added, the resource database rebuilt using <command>cap_mkdb</command>, and edits made to <filename>/etc/master.passwd</filename>.
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