Date: Tue, 2 Sep 2014 08:40:15 +0000 (UTC) From: Mathieu Arnold <mat@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r45540 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/versions Message-ID: <201409020840.s828eFZP094910@svn.freebsd.org>
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Author: mat (ports committer) Date: Tue Sep 2 08:40:15 2014 New Revision: 45540 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/45540 Log: Minor wording fixes. (mainly igor -y) Differential Revision: https://reviews.freebsd.org/D657 Reviewed by: wblock Sponsored by: Absolight Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/versions/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/versions/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/versions/chapter.xml Mon Sep 1 15:37:41 2014 (r45539) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/versions/chapter.xml Tue Sep 2 08:40:15 2014 (r45540) @@ -1095,8 +1095,8 @@ <row> <entry>500101</entry> <entry>February 19, 2003</entry> - <entry><sys/dkstat.h> is empty and should - not be included.</entry> + <entry><sys/dkstat.h> is empty. Do not include + it.</entry> </row> <row> @@ -2500,7 +2500,7 @@ Legacy RFC 1724 behavior of the IP_MULTICAST_IF ioctl has now been removed; 0.0.0.0/8 may no longer be used to specify an interface index. - struct ipmreqn should be used instead.</entry> + Use struct ipmreqn instead.</entry> </row> <row> @@ -2621,7 +2621,7 @@ <entry>May 5, 2008</entry> <entry>7.0-STABLE after some &man.lockmgr.9; changes, which makes it necessary to include - <filename>sys/lock.h</filename> in order to use + <filename>sys/lock.h</filename> to use &man.lockmgr.9;.</entry> </row> @@ -3490,7 +3490,7 @@ <function>sx_init_flags()</function> KPI. The <constant>SX_ADAPTIVESPIN</constant> is retired and a new <constant>SX_NOADAPTIVE</constant> flag is - introduced in order to handle the reversed + introduced to handle the reversed logic.</entry> </row> @@ -4722,7 +4722,7 @@ <row> <entry>1000034</entry> <entry>June 3, 2013</entry> - <entry>10-CURRENT after the addition of the following + <entry>10-CURRENT after the addition of these functions to libm: <function>cacos</function>, <function>cacosf</function>, <function>cacosh</function>, @@ -5342,9 +5342,9 @@ pattern used to be year followed by the month, but we decided to change it to a more straightforward major/minor system starting from 2.2. This is because the parallel development on several - branches made it infeasible to classify the releases simply by - their real release dates. If you are making a port now, you do - not have to worry about old -CURRENTs; they are listed here just - for your reference.</para> + branches made it infeasible to classify the releases merely by + their real release dates. Do + not worry about old -CURRENTs; they are listed here just + for reference.</para> </note> </chapter>
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