Date: Mon, 6 Feb 2006 12:08:40 GMT From: Enrique Matías Sánchez <cronopios@gmail.com> To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Subject: docs/92885: Meanless sentence in handbook? Message-ID: <200602061208.k16C8epV014076@www.freebsd.org> Resent-Message-ID: <200602061210.k16CA4jj089626@freefall.freebsd.org>
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>Number: 92885
>Category: docs
>Synopsis: Meanless sentence in handbook?
>Confidential: no
>Severity: non-critical
>Priority: low
>Responsible: freebsd-doc
>State: open
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>Class: doc-bug
>Submitter-Id: current-users
>Arrival-Date: Mon Feb 06 12:10:04 GMT 2006
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator: Enrique Matías Sánchez
>Release: 6.0-STABLE x86
>Organization:
FDP-es
>Environment:
>Description:
In section "Understanding MAC Labels" (Chapter 15.4 of the handbook) it is written:
Numeric grade numbers used for comparison:compartment+compartment; thus the following:
Is that proper English?
I am not a native speaker, but, is not `numeric' or `numbers' redundant?
Should not there be an `are' before `used'?
Thanks.
>How-To-Repeat:
Visit "Understanding MAC Labels" (chapter about Mandatory Access Control) of the handbook.
>Fix:
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