Date: Thu, 6 Jan 2005 22:38:41 +0100 From: "Joel Dahl" <joel@automatvapen.se> To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Subject: docs/75902: [patch] Update handbook, section 23.5.4, two small typos Message-ID: <20050106213825.6BC7E37E47@smtp4-2-sn2.hy.skanova.net> Resent-Message-ID: <200501062140.j06LeU7j088974@freefall.freebsd.org>
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>Number: 75902
>Category: docs
>Synopsis: [patch] Update handbook, section 23.5.4, two small typos
>Confidential: no
>Severity: non-critical
>Priority: low
>Responsible: freebsd-doc
>State: open
>Quarter:
>Keywords:
>Date-Required:
>Class: doc-bug
>Submitter-Id: current-users
>Arrival-Date: Thu Jan 06 21:40:30 GMT 2005
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator: Joel Dahl
>Release: FreeBSD 5.3-STABLE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD dude.automatvapen.se 5.3-STABLE FreeBSD 5.3-STABLE #0: Sat Jan 1 14:36:28 CET 2005 joel@dude.automatvapen.se:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/WRK i386
>Description:
1. DHCP configuration is actually the second question (IPv6 is the first).
2. Sysinstall says "the interface", not "this interface".
>How-To-Repeat:
>Fix:
--- sysdhcp.diff begins here ---
Index: chapter.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.51
diff -u -r1.51 chapter.sgml
--- chapter.sgml 1 Jan 2005 20:17:17 -0000 1.51
+++ chapter.sgml 6 Jan 2005 21:27:14 -0000
@@ -2600,9 +2600,9 @@
<para>DHCP is supported by
<application>sysinstall</application>. When configuring a
network interface within
- <application>sysinstall</application>, the first question
+ <application>sysinstall</application>, the second question
asked is: <quote>Do you want to try DHCP configuration of
- this interface?</quote>. Answering affirmatively will
+ the interface?</quote>. Answering affirmatively will
execute <command>dhclient</command>, and if successful, will
fill in the network configuration information
automatically.</para>
--- sysdhcp.diff ends here ---
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>Audit-Trail:
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