Date: Sun, 20 Feb 2005 14:33:00 +0100 (CET) From: Siebrand Mazeland <s.mazeland@xs4all.nl> To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Subject: docs/77775: [PATCH] More contractions in handbook removed Message-ID: <20050220133300.D1FAB61C35@nfishbone.nitro.dk> Resent-Message-ID: <200502201340.j1KDeU6U033729@freefall.freebsd.org>
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>Number: 77775 >Category: docs >Synopsis: [PATCH] More contractions in handbook removed >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: update >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Sun Feb 20 13:40:29 GMT 2005 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Siebrand Mazeland >Release: FreeBSD 5.3-RELEASE-p4 i386 >Organization: >Environment: System: FreeBSD nfishbone.nitro.dk 5.3-RELEASE-p4 FreeBSD 5.3-RELEASE-p4 #1: Sun Jan 16 03:35:01 CET 2005 simon@nfishbone.nitro.dk:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/FISHBONE i386 >Description: Joeld inspired me to do some more nitpicking on the Handbook >How-To-Repeat: >Fix: ? en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls/chapter_white.sgml Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls/chapter.sgml =================================================================== RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls/chapter.sgml,v retrieving revision 1.37 diff -u -r1.37 chapter.sgml --- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls/chapter.sgml 19 Feb 2005 14:03:54 -0000 1.37 +++ en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls/chapter.sgml 20 Feb 2005 13:19:14 -0000 @@ -1451,7 +1451,7 @@ block in quick on dc0 from 224.0.0.0/3 to any #Class D & E multicast ##### Block a bunch of different nasty things. ############ -# That I don't want to see in the log +# That I do not want to see in the log # Block frags block in quick on dc0 all with frags Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.sgml =================================================================== RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.sgml,v retrieving revision 1.126 diff -u -r1.126 chapter.sgml --- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.sgml 13 Feb 2005 10:24:09 -0000 1.126 +++ en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.sgml 20 Feb 2005 13:21:19 -0000 @@ -497,8 +497,8 @@ <title>Configuring the <application>sendmail</application> Access Database</title> - <programlisting>cyberspammer.com 550 We don't accept mail from spammers -FREE.STEALTH.MAILER@ 550 We don't accept mail from spammers + <programlisting>cyberspammer.com 550 We do not accept mail from spammers +FREE.STEALTH.MAILER@ 550 We do not accept mail from spammers another.source.of.spam REJECT okay.cyberspammer.com OK 128.32 RELAY</programlisting> Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml =================================================================== RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml,v retrieving revision 1.263 diff -u -r1.263 chapter.sgml --- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml 19 Feb 2005 14:03:54 -0000 1.263 +++ en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml 20 Feb 2005 13:22:02 -0000 @@ -3838,7 +3838,7 @@ <para>That is, the <emphasis>public</emphasis> IP address of the remote end, whitespace, and a text string that provides the secret. - Obviously, you shouldn't use <quote>secret</quote> as your key -- the normal + Obviously, you should not use <quote>secret</quote> as your key -- the normal rules for choosing a password apply.</para> <para>On gateway host #2 the line would look like this</para> >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted:
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