Date: Mon, 6 Nov 2006 18:58:19 +0100 (CET) From: Gabor Kovesdan <gabor@FreeBSD.org> To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Cc: Gabor Kovesdam <gabor@FreeBSD.org> Subject: www/105216: [patch] www/en/about.sgml - improve grammar Message-ID: <20061106175819.4064A9A0DCD@server.t-hosting.hu> Resent-Message-ID: <200611061800.kA6I0tnR059289@freefall.freebsd.org>
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>Number: 105216 >Category: www >Synopsis: [patch] www/en/about.sgml - improve grammar >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-www >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Mon Nov 06 18:00:55 GMT 2006 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Gabor Kovesdan >Release: FreeBSD 6.1-RELEASE-p3 amd64 >Organization: n/a >Environment: >Description: - "is" sounds weird with "these", "are" is better in this case >How-To-Repeat: >Fix: --- about.sgml.diff begins here --- Index: www/en/about.sgml =================================================================== RCS file: /usr/cvs/www/en/about.sgml,v retrieving revision 1.10 diff -u -r1.10 about.sgml --- www/en/about.sgml 12 Oct 2006 09:21:19 -0000 1.10 +++ www/en/about.sgml 6 Nov 2006 17:22:32 -0000 @@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ including CD-ROM, DVD-ROM, floppy disk, magnetic tape, an MS-DOS® partition, or if you have a network connection, you can install it <i>directly</i> over - anonymous FTP or NFS. All you need is + anonymous FTP or NFS. All you need are <a href="&base;/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install.html">these directions</a>.</p> --- about.sgml.diff ends here --- >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted:
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