Date: Sat, 12 Apr 2014 20:49:07 +0000 (UTC) From: Glen Barber <gjb@FreeBSD.org> To: src-committers@freebsd.org, svn-src-all@freebsd.org, svn-src-stable@freebsd.org, svn-src-stable-10@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r264381 - stable/10/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes Message-ID: <201404122049.s3CKn7qG034854@svn.freebsd.org>
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Author: gjb Date: Sat Apr 12 20:49:07 2014 New Revision: 264381 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/264381 Log: Clean up leading/trailing whitespace. Rewrap paragraphs and long lines. Sponsored by: The FreeBSD Foundation Modified: stable/10/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml Modified: stable/10/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml ============================================================================== --- stable/10/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml Sat Apr 12 20:42:03 2014 (r264380) +++ stable/10/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml Sat Apr 12 20:49:07 2014 (r264381) @@ -1,14 +1,16 @@ <?xml version="1.0" encoding="iso-8859-1"?> <!DOCTYPE article PUBLIC "-//FreeBSD//DTD DocBook XML V5.0-Based Extension//EN" - "../../../share/xml/freebsd50.dtd" [ + "../../../share/xml/freebsd50.dtd" [ <!ENTITY % release PUBLIC "-//FreeBSD//ENTITIES Release Specification//EN" "release.ent"> %release; ]> <article xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:xlink="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" version="5.0"> -<info><title>&os; &release.current; Release Notes</title> - +<info> + <title>&os; &release.current; Release Notes</title> - <author><orgname>The &os; Project</orgname></author> + <author> + <orgname>The &os; Project</orgname> + </author> <pubdate>$FreeBSD$</pubdate> @@ -41,13 +43,13 @@ </legalnotice> <abstract> - <para>The release notes for &os; &release.current; contain a summary - of the changes made to the &os; base system on the - &release.branch; development line. - This document lists applicable security advisories that were issued since - the last release, as well as significant changes to the &os; - kernel and userland. - Some brief remarks on upgrading are also presented.</para> + <para>The release notes for &os; &release.current; contain + a summary of the changes made to the &os; base system on the + &release.branch; development line. This document lists + applicable security advisories that were issued since the last + release, as well as significant changes to the &os; kernel and + userland. Some brief remarks on upgrading are also + presented.</para> </abstract> </info> @@ -55,30 +57,32 @@ <title>Introduction</title> <para>This document contains the release notes for &os; - &release.current;. It - describes recently added, changed, or deleted features of &os;. - It also provides some notes on upgrading - from previous versions of &os;.</para> - - <para releasetype="current">The &release.type; distribution to which these release notes - apply represents the latest point along the &release.branch; development - branch since &release.branch; was created. Information regarding pre-built, binary - &release.type; distributions along this branch - can be found at <uri xlink:href="&release.url;">&release.url;</uri>.</para> - - <para releasetype="snapshot">The &release.type; distribution to which these release notes - apply represents a point along the &release.branch; development - branch between &release.prev; and the future &release.next;. - Information regarding - pre-built, binary &release.type; distributions along this branch - can be found at <uri xlink:href="&release.url;">&release.url;</uri>.</para> - - <para releasetype="release">This distribution of &os; &release.current; is a - &release.type; distribution. It can be found at <uri xlink:href="&release.url;">&release.url;</uri> or any of its mirrors. More - information on obtaining this (or other) &release.type; - distributions of &os; can be found in the <link xlink:href="&url.books.handbook;/mirrors.html"><quote>Obtaining - &os;</quote> appendix</link> to the <link xlink:href="&url.books.handbook;/">&os; - Handbook</link>.</para> + &release.current;. It describes recently added, changed, or + deleted features of &os;. It also provides some notes on + upgrading from previous versions of &os;.</para> + + <para releasetype="current">The &release.type; distribution to which + these release notes apply represents the latest point along the + &release.branch; development branch since &release.branch; was + created. Information regarding pre-built, binary &release.type; + distributions along this branch can be found at <uri + xlink:href="&release.url;">&release.url;</uri>.</para> + + <para releasetype="snapshot">The &release.type; distribution to + which these release notes apply represents a point along the + &release.branch; development branch between &release.prev; and the + future &release.next;. Information regarding pre-built, binary + &release.type; distributions along this branch can be found at + <uri xlink:href="&release.url;">&release.url;</uri>.</para> + + <para releasetype="release">This distribution of &os; + &release.current; is a &release.type; distribution. It can be + found at <uri xlink:href="&release.url;">&release.url;</uri> or + any of its mirrors. More information on obtaining this (or other) + &release.type; distributions of &os; can be found in the <link + xlink:href="&url.books.handbook;/mirrors.html"><quote>Obtaining + &os;</quote> appendix</link> to the <link + xlink:href="&url.books.handbook;/">&os; Handbook</link>.</para> <para>All users are encouraged to consult the release errata before installing &os;. The errata document is updated with @@ -87,26 +91,22 @@ information on known bugs, security advisories, and corrections to documentation. An up-to-date copy of the errata for &os; &release.current; can be found on the &os; Web site.</para> - </sect1> <sect1 xml:id="new"> <title>What's New</title> - <para>This section describes - the most user-visible new or changed features in &os; - since &release.prev;.</para> - - <para>Typical release note items - document recent security advisories issued after - &release.prev;, - new drivers or hardware support, new commands or options, - major bug fixes, or contributed software upgrades. They may also - list changes to major ports/packages or release engineering - practices. Clearly the release notes cannot list every single - change made to &os; between releases; this document focuses - primarily on security advisories, user-visible changes, and major - architectural improvements.</para> + <para>This section describes the most user-visible new or changed + features in &os; since &release.prev;.</para> + + <para>Typical release note items document recent security advisories + issued after &release.prev;, new drivers or hardware support, new + commands or options, major bug fixes, or contributed software + upgrades. They may also list changes to major ports/packages or + release engineering practices. Clearly the release notes cannot + list every single change made to &os; between releases; this + document focuses primarily on security advisories, user-visible + changes, and major architectural improvements.</para> <sect2 xml:id="security"> <title>Security Advisories</title> @@ -227,15 +227,15 @@ </sect1> <sect1 xml:id="upgrade"> - <title>Upgrading from previous releases of &os;</title> + <title>Upgrading from Previous Releases of &os;</title> - <para arch="amd64,i386">Beginning with &os; 6.2-RELEASE, - binary upgrades between RELEASE versions (and snapshots of the - various security branches) are supported using the - &man.freebsd-update.8; utility. The binary upgrade procedure will - update unmodified userland utilities, as well as unmodified GENERIC or - SMP kernels distributed as a part of an official &os; release. - The &man.freebsd-update.8; utility requires that the host being + <para arch="amd64,i386">Beginning with &os; 6.2-RELEASE, binary + upgrades between RELEASE versions (and snapshots of the various + security branches) are supported using the &man.freebsd-update.8; + utility. The binary upgrade procedure will update unmodified + userland utilities, as well as unmodified GENERIC or SMP kernels + distributed as a part of an official &os; release. The + &man.freebsd-update.8; utility requires that the host being upgraded have Internet connectivity.</para> <para>Source-based upgrades (those based on recompiling the &os;
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