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Date:      Tue, 2 Jul 2013 18:10:10 -0600 (MDT)
From:      Warren Block <wblock@wonkity.com>
To:        Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@MIT.EDU>
Cc:        svn-doc-head@freebsd.org, Gabor Pali <pgj@freebsd.org>, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, doc-committers@freebsd.org
Subject:   Re: svn commit: r42117 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status
Message-ID:  <alpine.BSF.2.00.1307021804150.56578@wonkity.com>
In-Reply-To: <alpine.GSO.1.10.1307021917170.26275@multics.mit.edu>
References:  <201307021441.r62EfNOi068696@svn.freebsd.org> <alpine.GSO.1.10.1307021917170.26275@multics.mit.edu>

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On Tue, 2 Jul 2013, Benjamin Kaduk wrote:

> On Tue, 2 Jul 2013, Gabor Pali wrote:
>
>> +    <body>
>> +      <p>The Documentation Project has been behind with the used
>> +	standards until recently when we switched to a real XML toolchain
>
> s/behind with the used standards/using old versions of markup standards/, 
> perhaps?  That's still not great, there may be a better wording.

"The Documentation Project had been using DocBook SGML, which most other 
projects in the Solar System stopped using a decade ago.  In June, we 
switched to a real XML toolchain and DocBook XML 4.5."

...

>> +      <p>This project is generously founded by The &os; Foundation.</p>
>> +    </body>

"funded".



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