Date: Mon, 21 Feb 2005 07:20:14 GMT From: "Jesus R. Camou" <jcamou@cox.net> To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: docs/77817: [PATCH] vinum chapter (handbook) fixes Message-ID: <200502210720.j1L7KEqd005805@freefall.freebsd.org>
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The following reply was made to PR docs/77817; it has been noted by GNATS. From: "Jesus R. Camou" <jcamou@cox.net> To: Remko Lodder <remko@elvandar.org> Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: docs/77817: [PATCH] vinum chapter (handbook) fixes Date: Mon, 21 Feb 2005 00:20:24 -0700 --EVF5PPMfhYS0aIcm Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline On Mon, Feb 21, 2005 at 06:21:31AM +0100, Remko Lodder wrote: > Jesus R. Camou wrote: > >>Number: 77817 > >>Category: docs > >>Synopsis: [PATCH] vinum chapter (handbook) fixes > >>Confidential: no > >>Severity: non-critical > >>Priority: medium > >>Responsible: freebsd-doc > >>State: open > >>Quarter: > >>Keywords: > >>Date-Required: > >>Class: change-request > >>Submitter-Id: current-users > >>Arrival-Date: Mon Feb 21 01:10:11 GMT 2005 > >>Closed-Date: > >>Last-Modified: > >>Originator: Jesus R. Camou > >>Release: FreeBSD 4.11-STABLE i386 > >>Organization: > >>Environment: > > > >System: FreeBSD opensea.mephis.org 4.11-STABLE FreeBSD 4.11-STABLE #0: Sun > >Feb 13 21:22:53 MST 2005 > >jcamou@opensea.mephis.org:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/HACKED i386 > > > > > >>Description: > > > > > > o Isn't Hiten Pandya's email hmp@FreeBSD.org? Change this. > > o s/4.x/4.X/ and s/5.x/5.X/ > > o add white space: devicename -> device name > > > > > >>How-To-Repeat: > > > > > >>Fix: > > > > > >--- vinum.diff begins here --- > >Index: chapter.sgml > >=================================================================== > >RCS file: > >/home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/vinum/chapter.sgml,v > >retrieving revision 1.34 > >diff -u -r1.34 chapter.sgml > >--- chapter.sgml 11 Jan 2005 12:34:29 -0000 1.34 > >+++ chapter.sgml 21 Feb 2005 00:42:10 -0000 > >@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ > > The Vinum Volume Manager > > By Greg Lehey (grog at lemis dot com) > > > >- Added to the Handbook by Hiten Pandya <hiten@FreeBSD.org> > >+ Added to the Handbook by Hiten Pandya <hmp@FreeBSD.org> > > and Tom Rhodes <trhodes@FreeBSD.org> > > > > For the FreeBSD Documentation Project > >@@ -1078,8 +1078,8 @@ > > start</command> command.</para> > > > > <note><para>The following paragraphs are outlining the steps > >- needed for FreeBSD 5.x and above. The setup required for > >- FreeBSD 4.x differs, and is described below in <xref > >+ needed for FreeBSD 5.X and above. The setup required for > >+ FreeBSD 4.X differs, and is described below in <xref > > linkend="vinum-root-4x">.</para></note> > > > > <para>By placing the line:</para> > >@@ -1096,7 +1096,7 @@ > > root device in <filename>/etc/fstab</filename>, and passes > > this information on to the kernel. When it comes to mount > > the root filesystem, the kernel figures out from the > >- devicename provided which driver to ask to translate this > >+ device name provided which driver to ask to translate this > > into the internal device ID (major/minor number).</para> > > </listitem> > > </itemizedlist> > >--- vinum.diff ends here --- > > > > > > > >>Release-Note: > >>Audit-Trail: > >>Unformatted: > > > > You are correct about the hmp address. However the .x to .X in the > version numbering already had been done yesterday. You're completely right about that, I don't know why I missed it. Here's an updated patch, thanks! -- Jesus R. Camou <jcamou@COX.net> jcamou@es.FreeBSD.org --EVF5PPMfhYS0aIcm Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: attachment; filename="vinum2.diff" Index: chapter.sgml =================================================================== RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/vinum/chapter.sgml,v retrieving revision 1.36 diff -u -r1.36 chapter.sgml --- chapter.sgml 20 Feb 2005 17:33:19 -0000 1.36 +++ chapter.sgml 21 Feb 2005 07:13:23 -0000 @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ The Vinum Volume Manager By Greg Lehey (grog at lemis dot com) - Added to the Handbook by Hiten Pandya <hiten@FreeBSD.org> + Added to the Handbook by Hiten Pandya <hmp@FreeBSD.org> and Tom Rhodes <trhodes@FreeBSD.org> For the FreeBSD Documentation Project @@ -1096,7 +1096,7 @@ root device in <filename>/etc/fstab</filename>, and passes this information on to the kernel. When it comes to mount the root filesystem, the kernel figures out from the - devicename provided which driver to ask to translate this + device name provided which driver to ask to translate this into the internal device ID (major/minor number).</para> </listitem> </itemizedlist> --EVF5PPMfhYS0aIcm--
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