Date: Sat, 30 Oct 2004 21:55:44 +0200 From: Pawel Worach <pawel.worach@telia.com> To: Hiroki Sato <hrs@freebsd.org> Cc: doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: cvs commit: src/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/errata article.sgml Message-ID: <4183F1C0.1000402@telia.com> In-Reply-To: <20041031.025215.122578228.hrs@eos.ocn.ne.jp> References: <200410301725.i9UHP94g070958@repoman.freebsd.org> <20041031.025215.122578228.hrs@eos.ocn.ne.jp>
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Hiroki Sato wrote: > I have committed a draft version of the 5.3R errata. The HTML > version of it is found at: > > http://people.freebsd.org/~hrs/relnotes/5.3R/errata/article.html > > Please review this and let me know your comments, thanks. > Potential wording corrections? --- article.sgml.orig Sat Oct 30 21:27:36 2004 +++ article.sgml Sat Oct 30 21:53:32 2004 @@ -150,7 +150,7 @@ <programlisting>block log quick proto { tcp, udp } all user root</programlisting> <para>To set <varname>debug.mpsafenet</varname> to <literal>0</literal> - in every boot time, add the following line into + on every boot, add the following line into <filename>/boot/loader.conf</filename>:</para> <programlisting>debug.mpsafenet=0</programlisting> @@ -165,13 +165,13 @@ &man.ipfw.8; and &man.pf.conf.5; manual pages.</para> <para>(31 Oct 2004) The &man.vinum.4; subsystem - works fine on 5.3, but it can cause a system panic on boot time. + works fine on 5.3, but it can cause a system panic at boot time. As a workaround you can add <literal>vinum_load="YES"</literal> in <filename>/boot/loader.conf</filename>.</para> - <para>Instead, you can also use the new, &man.geom.4;-based + <para>As an alternative you can use the new, &man.geom.4;-based &man.vinum.4; subsystem. To activate the &man.geom.4;-aware - vinum on boot time, the following steps are needed:</para> + vinum at boot time, the following steps are needed:</para> <itemizedlist> <listitem> @@ -201,11 +201,11 @@ </itemizedlist> <para>While some sort of uncommon configurations such as - multiple vinum drivers in a disk are not supported, + multiple vinum drives in a disk are not supported, it is basically backward compatible. Note that for the &man.geom.4;-aware vinum the userland control program, <command>gvinum</command> should be used, - and this still lacks a few functionality.</para> + and it still lacks some functionality.</para> <para>(31 Oct 2004) The results of <command>netstat -m</command> can become incorrect on an SMP system when <varname>debug.mpsafenet</varname> @@ -217,7 +217,7 @@ without PS/2 ports using an USB keyboard, the keyboard will stop working once the kernel boots. As a workaround, select <quote>Escape to loader prompt</quote> in the boot loader menu - and enter the following line to the prompt:</para> + and enter the following lines at the prompt:</para> <screen>set hint.atkbd.0.flags="0x1" boot</screen> -- Pawel
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