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Date:      Fri, 29 Mar 2002 20:38:37 -0800 (PST)
From:      "Bruce A. Mah" <bmah@FreeBSD.org>
To:        Perforce Change Reviews <perforce@freebsd.org>
Subject:   PERFORCE change 8652 for review
Message-ID:  <200203300438.g2U4cbB19994@freefall.freebsd.org>

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Change 8652 by bmah@bmah_intruder on 2002/03/29 20:37:44

	Rewrite the introduction to give some information about the
	purpose of DP1.  Adjust cross-reference to the errata file.
	Note our sparc64 support, which has no sysinstall.

Affected files ...

... //depot/releng/5_dp1/src/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/readme/article.sgml#3 edit

Differences ...

==== //depot/releng/5_dp1/src/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/readme/article.sgml#3 (text+ko) ====

@@ -38,16 +38,35 @@
   <sect1>
     <title>Introduction</title>
 
-    <para>This distribution is a &release.type; of &os; &release.current;, the
-      latest point along the &release.branch; branch.</para>
+    <para>&os; &release.current; is a <quote>developer
+      preview</quote>, which is based on the state of &os;
+      &release.branch; on 15 March 2002.  A small number of changes
+      have been made to the system, primarily to improve its stability
+      so that more of its features can be used and tested.</para>
+
+    <para>There are two main goals behind &os; &release.current;
+      (<quote>Developer Preview 1</quote>).  The first is to give the
+      wider &os; community a preview of some of the new features of
+      &release.next;, which is scheduled for release late in
+      2002.  The second goal of the developer preview is solicit test
+      reports and feedback on both new and old features.</para>
+
+    <para>This developer preview is not for production use; it
+      contains known bugs and instabilities that should be fixed
+      before &os; &release.next;.  It is best considered a
+      <quote>polished snapshot</quote>.  Users testing
+      &release.current; are highly encouraged to read the errata file,
+      which lists some of the known problems, as well as areas of the
+      system that could benefit from some extra attention during
+      testing.</para>
 
     <sect2>
       <title>About &os;</title>
 
       <para>&os; is an operating system based on 4.4 BSD Lite for
 	Intel, AMD, Cyrix or NexGen <quote>x86</quote> based PC
-	hardware and Compaq (formerly DEC) Alpha computers.  Versions
-	for the IA64, PowerPC, and Sparc64 architectures are currently under
+	hardware, Compaq (formerly DEC) Alpha computers, and UltraSPARC machines.  Versions
+	for the IA64 and PowerPC architectures are currently under
 	development as well.  &os; works with a wide variety of
 	peripherals and configurations and can be used for everything
 	from software development to games to Internet Service
@@ -297,13 +316,12 @@
 
 	  <listitem>
 	    <para><filename>ERRATA.TXT</filename>: Release errata.
-	      Late-breaking, post-release information can be found in
-	      this file, which is principally applicable to releases
-	      (as opposed to snapshots).  It is important to consult
-	      this file before installing a release of &os;, as it
-	      contains the latest information on problems which have
-	      been found and fixed since the release was
-	      created.</para>
+	      For this developer preview, this file lists some
+	      outstanding issues and problems, as well as a list of
+	      features that could benefit from some wider testing.
+	      Unlike the errata file for a regular &os; release, this
+	      file will <emphasis>not</emphasis> be updated after
+	      &release.current; is <quote>frozen</quote>.</para>
 	  </listitem>
 	</itemizedlist>
 
@@ -321,24 +339,12 @@
 
       </para>
 
-      <para>These documents are generally available via the
+      <para>On platforms that support &man.sysinstall.8; (currently
+	the i386 and alpha), these documents are generally available via the
 	Documentation menu during installation.  Once the system is
-	installed, you can revisit this menu by running the
+	installed, you can revisit this menu by re-running the
 	&man.sysinstall.8; utility.</para>
 
-      <note>
-	<para>It is extremely important to read the errata for any
-	  given release before installing it, to learn about any
-	  <quote>late-breaking news</quote> or post-release problems.
-	  The errata file accompanying each release (most likely right
-	  next to this file) is already out of date by definition, but
-	  other copies are kept updated on the Internet and should be
-	  consulted as the <quote>current errata</quote> for this
-	  release.  These other copies of the errata are located at
-	  <ulink url="http://www.FreeBSD.org/releases/"></ulink>; (as
-	  well as any sites which keep up-to-date mirrors of this
-	  location).</para>
-      </note>
     </sect2>
 
     <sect2>

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