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Date:      Tue, 18 May 2004 14:24:10 +0200
From:      Pawel Jakub Dawidek <pjd@FreeBSD.org>
To:        Lukas Ertl <le@FreeBSD.org>
Cc:        cvs-all@FreeBSD.org
Subject:   Re: cvs commit: src/share/man/man9 g_access.9 g_attach.9 g_bio.9 g_consumer.9 g_data.9 g_event.9 g_provider.9 g_provider_by_name.9 g_wither_geom.9
Message-ID:  <20040518122410.GL845@darkness.comp.waw.pl>
In-Reply-To: <200405181133.i4IBXbnH078994@repoman.freebsd.org>
References:  <200405181133.i4IBXbnH078994@repoman.freebsd.org>

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On Tue, May 18, 2004 at 04:33:37AM -0700, Lukas Ertl wrote:
+> le          2004/05/18 04:33:37 PDT
+>=20
+>   FreeBSD src repository
+>=20
+>   Modified files:
+>     share/man/man9       g_access.9 g_attach.9 g_bio.9=20
+>                          g_consumer.9 g_data.9 g_event.9=20
+>                          g_provider.9 g_provider_by_name.9=20
+>                          g_wither_geom.9=20
+>   Log:
+>   Update several GEOM related manual pages:
+>  =20
+>     *) Fix spelling errors.
+>     *) Better english.
+>     *) Re-phrasing.

Everything looks ok, only few things.

+>  .Sh DESCRIPTION
+>  The
+>  .Fn g_attach
+> -function attaches given consumer to given provider.
+> -For real provider access (ie. I/O operations), one still need to call t=
he
+> -.Fn g_access
+> -function on consumer to gain access to attached provider.
+> +function attaches given consumer
+> +.Fa cp
+> +to given provider
+> +.Fa pp ,
+> +thus establishing a communication channel between the consumer and the
+> +provider that allows to change access counts or perform I/O operations.

I'm not sure "or" is right word here, as we first _must_ change access
count and then we can perform I/O operations.

+>  .It Dv BIO_GETATTR
+> -Get attribute supports inspection and manipulation of out\-of\-band
+> +Inspect and manipulate out\-of\-band
+>  attributes on a particular provider or path.

Those \ aren't needed here.

+> -The provider name is created in a printf\-like way from the rest of
+> +The name of the provider, which will appear as device in devfs, is crea=
ted
+> +in a printf\-like way from the rest of

We don't need \ here as well.

Thanks for those cleanups and sorry once again.

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Pawel Jakub Dawidek                       http://www.FreeBSD.org
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