Date: Fri, 25 Mar 2016 03:09:49 +0000 (UTC) From: Warren Block <wblock@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r48468 - in head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook: slow-porting uses Message-ID: <201603250309.u2P39n2Y061805@repo.freebsd.org>
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Author: wblock Date: Fri Mar 25 03:09:49 2016 New Revision: 48468 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/48468 Log: Edits to simplify wording and reduce sentence length. Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/slow-porting/chapter.xml head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/uses/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/slow-porting/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/slow-porting/chapter.xml Fri Mar 25 02:17:49 2016 (r48467) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/slow-porting/chapter.xml Fri Mar 25 03:09:49 2016 (r48468) @@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ <filename>bsd.port.mk</filename> in another window while reading this really helps to understand it.</para> - <para>But do not worry not many people understand exactly how + <para>But do not worry, not many people understand exactly how <filename>bsd.port.mk</filename> is working... <!-- smiley --><emphasis>:-)</emphasis></para> @@ -442,10 +442,10 @@ DOS2UNIX_REGEX= .*\.([ch]|cpp)</programl <programlisting>USES= dos2unix DOS2UNIX_GLOB= *.c *.cpp *.h</programlisting> - <para>If there are more than one distribution file and some - other than the default need to have files converted, the base - directory for the conversions can be changed so that they are - also converted.</para> + + <para>The base directory for the conversion can be set. This + is useful when there are multiple distfiles and several + contain files which require line-ending conversion.</para> <programlisting>USES= dos2unix DOS2UNIX_WRKSRC= ${WRKDIR}</programlisting> Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/uses/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/uses/chapter.xml Fri Mar 25 02:17:49 2016 (r48467) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/uses/chapter.xml Fri Mar 25 03:09:49 2016 (r48468) @@ -355,7 +355,7 @@ <para>Possible arguments: (none)</para> <para>The port has files with line endings in - <acronym>DOS</acronym> format which need to be converted. Four + <acronym>DOS</acronym> format which need to be converted. Several variables can be set to control which files will be converted. The default is to convert <emphasis>all</emphasis> files, including binaries. See <xref @@ -380,7 +380,7 @@ <listitem> <para><varname>DOS2UNIX_WRKSRC</varname>: the directory from - which to start doing the conversions, defaults to + which to start the conversions. Defaults to <literal>${WRKSRC}</literal>.</para> </listitem> </itemizedlist>
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