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Date:      Thu, 17 Jul 2014 23:56:33 +0000 (UTC)
From:      Gavin Atkinson <gavin@FreeBSD.org>
To:        doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org
Subject:   svn commit: r45330 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status
Message-ID:  <201407172356.s6HNuXlr079059@svn.freebsd.org>

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Author: gavin
Date: Thu Jul 17 23:56:33 2014
New Revision: 45330
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/45330

Log:
  Minor wording tweaks.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2014-04-2014-06.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2014-04-2014-06.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2014-04-2014-06.xml	Thu Jul 17 17:32:35 2014	(r45329)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2014-04-2014-06.xml	Thu Jul 17 23:56:33 2014	(r45330)
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@
     <p>Thanks to all the reporters for the excellent work!  This
       report contains 22 entries and we hope you enjoy reading it.</p>
 
-    <p>The deadline for submissions covering between July and
+    <p>The deadline for submissions covering the period from July to
       September 2014 is October 7th, 2014.</p>
   </section>
 
@@ -752,7 +752,7 @@
 	engine, which can be integrated with cloud orchestration
 	systems like OpenStack or CloudStack.</p>
 
-      <p>This work's goal is to enable &os; as a fully supported
+      <p>The goal of this work is to enable &os; as a fully supported
 	compute host for OpenStack using OpenContrail virtualized
 	networking. The main areas of development are:</p>
 
@@ -926,9 +926,9 @@
 
     <body>
       <p>SDIO is an interface designed as an extension of the existing
-	SD card standard, which allows connecting different peripherals to
-	the host with the standard SD controller. Peripherals
-	currently sold at the general market include WLAN/BT modules,
+	SD card standard, which allows the connecting of different
+	peripherals to the host with a standard SD controller. Peripherals
+	currently sold on the general market include WLAN/BT modules,
 	cameras, fingerprint readers, and barcode scanners.
 	Additionally, SDIO is used to connect some peripherals in
 	products like Chromebooks and Wandboard.  A prototype of the



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