Date: Thu, 4 Sep 2003 14:58:33 -0400 From: Tom Rhodes <trhodes@FreeBSD.org> To: Martin Heinen <martin@sumuk.de> Cc: Robert Watson <rwatson@FreeBSD.org> Subject: Re: [Review Request]: Kerberos5 final draft Message-ID: <20030904145833.2c64f226.trhodes@FreeBSD.org> In-Reply-To: <20030904210735.A68210@sumuk.de> References: <20030904133402.06da66da.trhodes@FreeBSD.org> <20030904210735.A68210@sumuk.de>
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On Thu, 4 Sep 2003 21:07:35 +0200 Martin Heinen <martin@sumuk.de> wrote: > On Thu, Sep 04, 2003 at 01:34:02PM -0400, Tom Rhodes wrote: > > > Please see the diff and give me feedback. This has already gone > > through a good review on -doc so I'm only really waiting for Robert's > > review. Although I want to get any final comments or "please commit's" > > now. > > Here are my final markup nits, otherwise I'm fine: > > > --- chapter.sgml Thu Sep 4 13:12:30 2003 > > +++ chapter.new Thu Sep 4 13:19:05 2003 > > @@ -106,7 +106,7 @@ > > servers – meaning that external entities can connect and talk > > to them. As yesterday's mini-computers and mainframes become > > today's desktops, and as computers become networked and > > - internetworked, security becomes an even bigger issue.</para> > > + inter-networked, security becomes an even bigger issue.</para> > > This (still) should be a separate commit. It will be as it is a spelling fix and the rest are content fixes. > > > + <screen>&prompt.user;<userinput>k5init <replaceable>tillman</replaceable></userinput> > > + tillman@EXAMPLE.ORG's Password: > > + > > + &prompt.user;<userinput>k5list</userinput> > > + Credentials cache: FILE:<filename>/tmp/krb5cc_500</filename> > > + Principal: tillman@EXAMPLE.ORG</screen> > > + > > + <screen>Issued Expires Principal > > + Aug 27 15:37:58 Aug 28 01:37:58 krbtgt/EXAMPLE.ORG@EXAMPLE.ORG > > + Aug 27 15:37:58 Aug 28 01:37:58 krbtgt/EXAMPLE.ORG@EXAMPLE.ORG</screen> > > + > > + <screen>v4-ticket file: /tmp/tkt500 > > + k5list: No ticket file (tf_util)</screen> > > Why use multiple screen elements here? All output > is produced by the k5list command. Therefore > one screen element is sufficient. Fixed. > > > + <screen>&prompt.root;kadmin > > Missing space and userinput: > > &prompt.root; <userinput>kadmin</userinput> Fixed. > > > + kadmin> add --random-key host/myserver.EXAMPLE.ORG > > + Max ticket life [unlimited]: > > + Max renewable life [unlimited]: > > + Attributes []: > > + kadmin> ext host/myserver.EXAMPLE.ORG > > + kadmin> exit</screen> > > [ ... ] Done. > > > + <screen>&prompt.root;kadmin > > + kadmin> ext --keytab=/tmp/example.keytab host/myserver.smithclan.prv > > + kadmin> exit</screen> > > The commands should be inside <userinput>. Done my friend, thank you. -- Tom Rhodes
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