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Date:      Thu, 17 Oct 2013 19:38:30 +0000 (UTC)
From:      Dru Lavigne <dru@FreeBSD.org>
To:        doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org
Subject:   svn commit: r42989 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/preface
Message-ID:  <201310171938.r9HJcU6m095176@svn.freebsd.org>

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Author: dru
Date: Thu Oct 17 19:38:30 2013
New Revision: 42989
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42989

Log:
  White space fix only. Translators can ignore.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/preface/preface.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/preface/preface.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/preface/preface.xml	Thu Oct 17 19:25:29 2013	(r42988)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/preface/preface.xml	Thu Oct 17 19:38:30 2013	(r42989)
@@ -36,33 +36,30 @@
 
   <itemizedlist>
     <listitem>
-      <para><xref linkend="dtrace"/> has been added with
-	information about the powerful &dtrace; performance analysis
-	tool.</para>
+      <para><xref linkend="dtrace"/> has been added with information
+	about the powerful &dtrace; performance analysis tool.</para>
     </listitem>
 
     <listitem>
-      <para><xref linkend="filesystems"/> has
-	been added with information about non-native file systems in
-	&os;, such as ZFS from &sun;.</para>
+      <para><xref linkend="filesystems"/> has been added with
+	information about non-native file systems in &os;, such as ZFS
+	from &sun;.</para>
     </listitem>
 
     <listitem>
-      <para><xref linkend="audit"/> has
-	been added to cover the new auditing capabilities in &os;
-	and explain its use.</para>
+      <para><xref linkend="audit"/> has been added to cover the new
+	auditing capabilities in &os; and explain its use.</para>
     </listitem>
 
     <listitem>
-      <para><xref linkend="virtualization"/> has
-	been added with information about installing &os; on
-	virtualization software.</para>
+      <para><xref linkend="virtualization"/> has been added with
+	information about installing &os; on virtualization
+	software.</para>
     </listitem>
 
     <listitem>
-      <para><xref linkend="bsdinstall"/> has been
-	added to cover installation of &os; using the new
-	installation utility,
+      <para><xref linkend="bsdinstall"/> has been added to cover
+	installation of &os; using the new installation utility,
 	<application>bsdinstall</application>.</para>
     </listitem>
   </itemizedlist>
@@ -78,32 +75,29 @@
 
   <itemizedlist>
     <listitem>
-      <para><xref linkend="config-tuning"/>
-	has been expanded with new information about the
-	ACPI power and resource management, the
-	<command>cron</command> system utility, and more kernel
-	tuning options.</para>
+      <para><xref linkend="config-tuning"/> has been expanded with new
+	information about the ACPI power and resource management, the
+	<command>cron</command> system utility, and more kernel tuning
+	options.</para>
     </listitem>
 
     <listitem>
-      <para><xref linkend="security"/> has been expanded
-	with new information about virtual private networks (VPNs),
-	file system access control lists (ACLs), and security
-	advisories.</para>
+      <para><xref linkend="security"/> has been expanded with new
+	information about virtual private networks (VPNs), file system
+	access control lists (ACLs), and security advisories.</para>
     </listitem>
 
     <listitem>
-      <para><xref linkend="mac"/>
-	is a new chapter with this edition.  It explains what MAC is
-	and how this mechanism can be used to secure a &os;
-	system.</para>
+      <para><xref linkend="mac"/> is a new chapter with this edition.
+	It explains what MAC is and how this mechanism can be used to
+	secure a &os; system.</para>
     </listitem>
 
     <listitem>
-      <para><xref linkend="disks"/> has been expanded with
-	new information about USB storage devices, file system
-	snapshots, file system quotas, file and network backed
-	filesystems, and encrypted disk partitions.</para>
+      <para><xref linkend="disks"/> has been expanded with new
+	information about USB storage devices, file system snapshots,
+	file system quotas, file and network backed filesystems, and
+	encrypted disk partitions.</para>
     </listitem>
 
     <listitem>
@@ -112,31 +106,29 @@
     </listitem>
 
     <listitem>
-      <para><xref linkend="mail"/> has been
-	expanded with new information about using alternative
-	transport agents, SMTP authentication, UUCP,
-	<application>fetchmail</application>,
+      <para><xref linkend="mail"/> has been expanded with new
+	information about using alternative transport agents, SMTP
+	authentication, UUCP, <application>fetchmail</application>,
 	<application>procmail</application>, and other advanced
 	topics.</para>
     </listitem>
 
     <listitem>
-      <para><xref linkend="network-servers"/> is
-	all new with this edition.  This chapter includes
-	information about setting up the <application>Apache HTTP
-	Server</application>, <application>ftpd</application>,
-	and setting up a server for &microsoft; &windows; clients
-	with <application>Samba</application>.  Some sections from
-	<xref linkend="advanced-networking"/>
-	were moved here to improve the presentation.</para>
+      <para><xref linkend="network-servers"/> is all new with this
+	edition.  This chapter includes information about setting up
+	the <application>Apache HTTP Server</application>,
+	<application>ftpd</application>, and setting up a server for
+	&microsoft; &windows; clients with
+	<application>Samba</application>.  Some sections from <xref
+	  linkend="advanced-networking"/> were moved here to improve
+	the presentation.</para>
     </listitem>
 
     <listitem>
-      <para><xref linkend="advanced-networking"/>
-	has been expanded with new information about
-	using &bluetooth; devices with &os;, setting up wireless
-	networks, and Asynchronous Transfer Mode (ATM)
-	networking.</para>
+      <para><xref linkend="advanced-networking"/> has been expanded
+	with new information about using &bluetooth; devices with
+	&os;, setting up wireless networks, and Asynchronous Transfer
+	Mode (ATM) networking.</para>
     </listitem>
 
     <listitem>
@@ -155,9 +147,8 @@
   First Edition (2001)</bridgehead>
 
     <para>The second edition was the culmination of over two years of
-      work by the dedicated members of the &os; Documentation
-      Project.  The following were the major changes in this
-      edition:</para>
+      work by the dedicated members of the &os; Documentation Project.
+      The following were the major changes in this edition:</para>
 
 <!-- Talk a little about justification and other stylesheet changes? -->
 
@@ -181,62 +172,56 @@
 	  <quote>Appendices</quote>.</para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
-	<para><xref linkend="install"/>
-	  was completely rewritten with many
-	  screenshots to make it much easier for new users to grasp
-	  the text.</para>
+	<para><xref linkend="install"/> was completely rewritten with
+	  many screenshots to make it much easier for new users to
+	  grasp the text.</para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
-	<para><xref linkend="basics"/>
-	  has been expanded to contain additional information about
-	  processes, daemons, and signals.</para>
+	<para><xref linkend="basics"/> has been expanded to contain
+	  additional information about processes, daemons, and
+	  signals.</para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
-	<para><xref linkend="ports"/>
-	  has been expanded to contain
+	<para><xref linkend="ports"/> has been expanded to contain
 	  additional information about binary package
 	  management.</para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
-	<para><xref linkend="x11"/>
-	  has been completely rewritten with an
-	  emphasis on using modern desktop technologies such as
+	<para><xref linkend="x11"/> has been completely rewritten with
+	  an emphasis on using modern desktop technologies such as
 	  <application>KDE</application> and
 	  <application>GNOME</application> on &xfree86; 4.X.</para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
-	<para><xref linkend="boot"/>
-	  has been expanded.</para>
+	<para><xref linkend="boot"/> has been expanded.</para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
-	<para><xref linkend="disks"/> has
-	  been written from what used to be two separate chapters on
-	  <quote>Disks</quote> and <quote>Backups</quote>.  We feel
-	  that the topics are easier to comprehend when presented as
-	  a single chapter.  A section on RAID (both hardware and
-	  software) has also been added.</para>
+	<para><xref linkend="disks"/> has been written from what used
+	  to be two separate chapters on <quote>Disks</quote> and
+	  <quote>Backups</quote>.  We feel that the topics are easier
+	  to comprehend when presented as a single chapter.  A section
+	  on RAID (both hardware and software) has also been
+	  added.</para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
-	<para><xref linkend="serialcomms"/>
-	  has been completely
+	<para><xref linkend="serialcomms"/> has been completely
 	  reorganized and updated for &os; 4.X/5.X.</para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
-	<para><xref linkend="ppp-and-slip"/> has
-	  been substantially updated.</para>
+	<para><xref linkend="ppp-and-slip"/> has been substantially
+	  updated.</para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
-	<para>Many new sections have been added to
-	  <xref linkend="advanced-networking"/>.</para>
+	<para>Many new sections have been added to <xref
+	    linkend="advanced-networking"/>.</para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
-	<para><xref linkend="mail"/>
-	  has been expanded to include more information about
-	  configuring <application>sendmail</application>.</para>
+	<para><xref linkend="mail"/> has been expanded to include more
+	  information about configuring
+	  <application>sendmail</application>.</para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
-	<para><xref linkend="linuxemu"/>
-	  has been expanded to include
+	<para><xref linkend="linuxemu"/> has been expanded to include
 	  information about installing
 	  <application>&oracle;</application> and
 	  <application>&sap.r3;</application>.</para>
@@ -267,15 +252,14 @@
     <emphasis>Common Tasks</emphasis>, covers some frequently used
     features of &os;.  This section, and all subsequent sections,
     can be read out of order.  Each chapter begins with a succinct
-    synopsis that
-    describes what the chapter covers and what the reader is expected
-    to already know.  This is meant to allow the casual reader to skip
-    around to find chapters of interest.  The third section,
-    <emphasis>System Administration</emphasis>, covers administration
-    topics.  The fourth section, <emphasis>Network
-    Communication</emphasis>, covers networking and server topics.
-    The fifth section contains
-    appendices of reference information.</para>
+    synopsis that describes what the chapter covers and what the
+    reader is expected to already know.  This is meant to allow the
+    casual reader to skip around to find chapters of interest.  The
+    third section, <emphasis>System Administration</emphasis>, covers
+    administration topics.  The fourth section, <emphasis>Network
+      Communication</emphasis>, covers networking and server topics.
+    The fifth section contains appendices of reference
+    information.</para>
 
   <variablelist>
 
@@ -328,9 +312,9 @@
       <term><emphasis><xref linkend="x11"/></emphasis></term>
       <listitem>
 	<para>Describes the X Window System in general and using
-	  X11 on &os; in particular.  Also describes common
+	  X11 on &os; in particular.  Also describes common and
 	  desktop environments such as <application>KDE</application>
-	  and <application>GNOME</application>.</para>
+	  <application>GNOME</application>.</para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
@@ -382,7 +366,8 @@
 <!-- Part III - System Administration -->
 
     <varlistentry>
-      <term><emphasis><xref linkend="config-tuning"/></emphasis></term>
+      <term><emphasis><xref
+	  linkend="config-tuning"/></emphasis></term>
       <listitem>
 	<para>Describes the parameters available for system
 	  administrators to tune a &os; system for optimum
@@ -393,9 +378,8 @@
     <varlistentry>
       <term><emphasis><xref linkend="boot"/></emphasis></term>
       <listitem>
-	<para>Describes the &os; boot process and explains
-	  how to control this process with configuration
-	  options.</para>
+	<para>Describes the &os; boot process and explains how to
+	  control this process with configuration options.</para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
     <varlistentry>
@@ -454,7 +438,8 @@
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
     <varlistentry>
-      <term><emphasis><xref linkend="virtualization"/></emphasis></term>
+      <term><emphasis><xref
+	  linkend="virtualization"/></emphasis></term>
       <listitem>
 	<para>Describes what virtualization systems offer, and how
 	  they can be used with &os;.</para>
@@ -469,7 +454,8 @@
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
     <varlistentry>
-      <term><emphasis><xref linkend="updating-upgrading"/></emphasis></term>
+      <term><emphasis><xref
+	  linkend="updating-upgrading"/></emphasis></term>
       <listitem>
 	<para>Explains the differences between &os;-STABLE,
 	  &os;-CURRENT, and &os; releases.  Describes which users
@@ -502,8 +488,8 @@
     <varlistentry>
       <term><emphasis><xref linkend="ppp-and-slip"/></emphasis></term>
       <listitem>
-	<para>Describes how to use PPP to
-	  connect to remote systems with &os;.</para>
+	<para>Describes how to use PPP to connect to remote systems
+	  with &os;.</para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
     <varlistentry>
@@ -516,7 +502,8 @@
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
     <varlistentry>
-      <term><emphasis><xref linkend="network-servers"/></emphasis></term>
+      <term><emphasis><xref
+	  linkend="network-servers"/></emphasis></term>
       <listitem>
 	<para>Provides detailed instructions and example configuration
 	  files to set up your &os; machine as a network filesystem
@@ -533,7 +520,8 @@
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
     <varlistentry>
-      <term><emphasis><xref linkend="advanced-networking"/></emphasis></term>
+      <term><emphasis><xref
+	  linkend="advanced-networking"/></emphasis></term>
       <listitem>
 	<para>Describes many networking topics, including sharing an
 	  Internet connection with other computers on your LAN,
@@ -600,10 +588,10 @@
     <varlistentry>
       <term><literal>Monospace</literal></term>
       <listitem>
-	<para>A <literal>monospaced</literal> font is
-	  used for error messages, commands, environment variables,
-	  names of ports, hostnames, user names, group names, device
-	  names, variables, and code fragments.</para>
+	<para>A <literal>monospaced</literal> font is used for error
+	  messages, commands, environment variables, names of ports,
+	  hostnames, user names, group names, device names, variables,
+	  and code fragments.</para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
     <varlistentry>



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