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Date:      Mon, 29 Aug 2011 16:46:41 GMT
From:      Isabell Long <isabell121@gmail.com>
To:        freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject:   docs/160284: [patch] Inconsistent spacing between colons in French translation of Dtrace Handbook chapter.
Message-ID:  <201108291646.p7TGkf7q084025@red.freebsd.org>
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>Number:         160284
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [patch] Inconsistent spacing between colons in French translation of Dtrace Handbook chapter.
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          open
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Mon Aug 29 16:50:06 UTC 2011
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator:     Isabell Long
>Release:        
>Organization:
>Environment:
>Description:
I was just reading through the recently committed French translation of the
Dtrace Handbook chapter and noticed a few punctuation inconsistencies that
I hadn't picked up on when I proofread my translation.  Sometimes, there is
no space before a colon, but at other times there is.  For other French
translations, convention seems to be no space before a colon.  The attached
patch fixes these inconsistencies for this document.

>How-To-Repeat:

>Fix:
See attached patch.

Patch attached with submission follows:

Index: chapter.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/isabell/freebsd/doc-cvs/doc/fr_FR.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/dtrace/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.1
diff -u -r1.1 chapter.sgml
--- chapter.sgml	13 Jun 2011 16:22:06 -0000	1.1
+++ chapter.sgml	29 Aug 2011 16:41:46 -0000
@@ -190,7 +190,7 @@
     <note>
       <para>Les utilisateurs de l'architecture AMD64 devraient ajouter
 	la ligne suivante &agrave; leur fichier de configuration de
-	noyau :</para>
+	noyau:</para>
 
       <programlisting>options         KDTRACE_FRAME</programlisting>
 
@@ -251,7 +251,7 @@
 
     <para>Le syst&egrave;me devrait maintenant supporter &dtrace;.
       Pour afficher toutes les sondes, l'administrateur peut
-      maintenant executer la commande :</para>
+      maintenant executer la commande:</para>
 
     <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>dtrace -l | more</userinput></screen>
 
@@ -267,7 +267,7 @@
       des informations syst&egrave;mes.  Il y a des scripts pour
       v&eacute;rifier les fichiers ouvertes, la m&eacute;moire,
       l'usage du <acronym>CPU</acronym> et beaucoup plus.  Il faut
-      extraire les scripts avec la commande suivante :</para>
+      extraire les scripts avec la commande suivante:</para>
 
     <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>gunzip -c DTracetoolkit* | tar xvf -</userinput></screen>
 


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