Date: Mon, 14 Oct 2002 19:13:19 -0700 From: Rogelio Rodriguez <rogelio@rogelior.dyndns.org> To: doc@freebsd.org Subject: (English) syntax question (handbook-related) Message-ID: <20021015021319.GH48094@rogelior.dyndns.org>
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Hi, In the first sentence of the second paragraph of the preface to the hanbook (that's certainly a mouthful) it seems (to me) that there is a syntax error. "Once you have travelled this far" acts like a conjunctive phrase (in this sentence) but there appears to be need for it. A cursory reading reveals no errors but it is probably more correct (and easier to read) without it. That's my opinion, anyway. :) -- Rogelio Rodriguez To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message
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