Date: Sat, 5 Oct 2013 05:29:45 +0000 (UTC) From: Eitan Adler <eadler@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r42844 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs Message-ID: <201310050529.r955TjED049437@svn.freebsd.org>
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Author: eadler Date: Sat Oct 5 05:29:45 2013 New Revision: 42844 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42844 Log: Somewhat simplify the about page. It is unlikely that a user new to FreeBSD wants a complete technical listing of the architectures we support. This page is still a wall of text and still contains irrelevant information, but this is a start. Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/about.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/about.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/about.xml Sat Oct 5 04:50:49 2013 (r42843) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/about.xml Sat Oct 5 05:29:45 2013 (r42844) @@ -15,19 +15,15 @@ <h2>What is FreeBSD?</h2> - <p>FreeBSD is an advanced operating system for x86 - compatible (including Pentium® and Athlon™), - amd64, x86-64 and x64 - compatible (including Opteron™, Athlon™64, - and EM64T), ARM, IA-64, PowerPC, PC-98 and UltraSPARC® - architectures. It is derived from BSD, the version of + <p>FreeBSD is an operating system for a <a + href="&base;/platforms/">variety of + platforms</a> focussing on features, speed, and + stability. It is derived from BSD, the version of &unix; developed at the University of California, Berkeley. It is developed and maintained by <a href="&base;/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributors/staff-committers.html">a - large team of individuals</a>. Additional <a - href="&base;/platforms/index.html">platforms</a> are - in various stages of development.</p> + large community</a>.</p> <h2>Cutting edge features</h2>
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